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七言-卷帘体习作,欢迎师友们互动
笑聊
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PostPosted: 2012-11-02 20:26:37    Post subject: 七言-卷帘体习作,欢迎师友们互动 Reply with quote

问候老师!以前只知有卷帘格的迷体,真不知有卷帘格的诗。而且蛮有意思,值得学习,今日临屏依韵学习老师写一首,也希望师友们一起乐起来!

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(一)
秋风肥蟹菊才真,
美味怡眸话口春。
世道多多遗憾事,
冬天过后草当茵。

(二)
美味怡眸话口春,
香茶月下涌诗频。
难能矢志求标的,
不忘人生快乐珍。

(三)
世道多多遗憾事,
成功恰是守心神。
坚持忍耐不离弃,
才有今生露脸新。

(四)
冬天过后草当茵,
毕竟晚秋才在巡。
四季心情都美妙,
物华呈现健康身。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-02 20:58:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊兄的卷帘体来得很快啊,与白云老师的成为珠链一双。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-03 00:21:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

香茶月下涌诗頻 - 笑聊诗才泉涌!
坚持忍耐不离弃,成功恰是守心神 - 坚韧不拔,成功之道。学习!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山.
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PostPosted: 2012-11-03 15:47:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
笑聊兄的卷帘体来得很快啊,与白云老师的成为珠链一双。


谢谢庆宏兄鼓励!问好!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-03 15:55:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
香茶月下涌诗頻 - 笑聊诗才泉涌!
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白云老师,从您的身上学到好多知识。(无论是做人方面,还是学问方面)积极向上的人生观永远值得学习!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-05 04:53:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊客气了!互相启发,大家开心!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-05 18:28:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

问候!老师在为人胸怀方面,我远不如您。(我有时会走入低迷) Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2012-11-06 12:27:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

才思敏捷,诗如泉涌。喜欢
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PostPosted: 2012-11-17 08:33:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白水鼓励!问好!
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