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溪行舟
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PostPosted: 2012-11-11 18:41:04    Post subject: 溪行舟 Reply with quote

风抚杨柳絮满堤,挥篙拨流孤舟移。
莺啼枝头春日乐,鸳晒暖阳岸边嬉。
远山隐隐随波尽,近水漾漾披绿衣。
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白云闲人
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PostPosted: 2012-11-12 01:49:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

冷雨很想与你多交流探讨,你的修辞练字很不错,所以十分希望你能多掌握、运用诗詞格律,这样大家研究的话题就丰富多彩了。举例说:你刚貼出的三首〝溪行舟〞、〝渔翁〞、〝柴院春〞,都均只有六句,〝律诗〞是八句、〞绝句〞是四句呢!望多研究互动,活跃生活。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-12 05:05:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云老师好,我猜这冷雨是等朋友们的接尾联呢 Razz
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PostPosted: 2012-11-12 20:22:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好白云老师!冷雨会努力的!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-12 22:59:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好白云老师!如何理解:空、静、悟、忍。这就是病症,已经困扰冷雨很久了,望您指点!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-13 07:10:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

問好冷雨!
冷雨,你所提及的〝空、静、悟、忍〞,乃是佛法之精深所在,我亦领会得很肤浅,望与你多交流,指引生活。据我十分肤浅的领悟,与你切磋:〝空〞就是佛法的《心经》中所提出的〝色即是空,空即是色〞,核心是去除人的执着。〝静〞是万物静观皆自得,人需保持清静心。〝悟〞是随缘順意去痴瞋。〝忍〞是树上小鸟皆朋友,万籁也是美乐音,何必动尘心。
请你多交流!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-13 07:45:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

佛学高深,引人入胜。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-13 20:38:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好二位老师!冷雨懂了,这是恩师临走前留下的一片苦心。谢谢白云老师!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-14 04:52:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝庆宏!佛法乃是处世之根基!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-14 04:55:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

冷雨,相互交流,共同学习。
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