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噪点·浊酒·刀肌理

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Posted: 2012-10-30 21:14:47 Post subject: 噪点·浊酒·刀肌理

噪点·浊酒·刀肌理文/殷晓媛《井绳崇拜》 “琴弦们整个旱季都醒着，那些光洁冰冷的银环蛇。”他手指上的石膏像一簇诡异的雪。“或许您应该拿琴弓把它们赶得远远的。”“先生，你知道，” 他拿起一份《明镜周刊》，“他们平时绕着您走，就像这报上的面孔，烟灰色、点阵不均匀的，您能触摸他们，而他们看不见您。”“且慢，” 这个《音乐家离奇失踪》的照片，很像您。”“是吗？他拿过来，“别开玩笑，这篇叫《无人列车》。” 一只墨绿如玉的鸟，站在车顶上，把两张车票各啄出一个小孔。《被暮色收养》酸性的角色被放在红椅子上，手捧着水貂一般皮毛光滑的书。目光狡黠，被各种路过和漂浮的纹章遮盖，最终消失在一堵贴满扑克的空气墙后。碱性的人物和暗橘黄调的风沙，相互博弈和溶解，和自己慢慢离散，时而落到车站大钟时针背后，时而被路人误以为是自己行李的重量。《Presto agitato》他站在车顶上拉小提琴。山楂色的月亮沉浮黯淡，而山谷和小城堡随着沙粒和雪花，一直往下陷，直到撞上大地的骨骸。黑暗深处，速记员用旧式打字机逐字打出：“丁香味的汹涌暮色像Weihenstephan的泡沫，淹没他的肉身并呛醒他的火焰。”

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Posted: 2012-10-31 05:59:25 Post subject:

意象纷呈喜欢这样的诗行：一只墨绿如玉的鸟，站在车顶上，把两张车票各啄出一个小孔。时针背后，时而被路人误以为是自己行李的重量。

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Posted: 2012-11-03 10:10:40 Post subject:

酸性的角色被放在红椅子上，手捧着水貂一般皮毛光滑的书。目光狡黠，被各种路过和漂浮的纹章遮盖，最终消失在一堵贴满扑克的空气墙后。碱性的人物和暗橘黄调的风沙，相互博弈和溶解，和自己慢慢离散，时而落到车站大钟时针背后，时而被路人误以为是自己行李的重量。 _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

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Posted: 2012-11-08 14:54:18 Post subject:

文本质感很突出，节奏是看点。~ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

青洋
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Posted: 2012-11-13 03:42:19 Post subject:

问好! _________________ 坐在方舟中的無用之人天天射落日的倒影

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Posted: 2012-11-23 16:45:22 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

意象纷呈
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谢谢白水姐来读，问好！

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Posted: 2012-11-23 16:46:07 Post subject:

chenrunmin wrote:

酸性的角色被放在红椅子上，手捧着
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谢谢诗友来读！

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Posted: 2012-11-23 16:46:32 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

文本质感很突出，节奏是看点。~

问好朋友！

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Posted: 2012-11-23 16:46:54 Post subject:

青洋 wrote:

问好!

问好朋友！谢谢来读

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