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丽日雪景
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PostPosted: 2012-11-10 12:02:42    Post subject: 丽日雪景 Reply with quote

. . 一 七 令 . .

嬌 !
風笛 ,
輕撩 。
銀蝶舞 ,
樂逍遥 。
層林素裹 ,
梨花如潮 。
藍天紅日笑 ,
萬里画图描 。
江泛白蓮朵朵 ,
波光分外妖嬈 。
直指青雲三千尺 ,
玉琢冰峰上九霄 !
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PostPosted: 2012-11-10 12:24:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

雪过天清红日朗,眺远四野俏銀妆。千树万树掛满白雪,若梨花盛放如潮。一陣清风轻拂,摇落纷飞雪花似蝶舞逍遥。展目看,長河泛起浮蓮朵朵,更显波光分外妖嬈。抬眼望,如玉琢的冰峰,高耸入雲三千尺,直上九霄。真是:丽日雪景俏,万里画图描!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-10 19:39:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好白云老师!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-10 22:43:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云老师好,好想知道您侨居何处?好美的景色,羡慕。 Toronto周边很难看见山,更不要说冰峰了 Sad
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PostPosted: 2012-11-11 00:37:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

景色秀美。令人难忘。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-11 01:39:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水好!身居加西远眺洛基山美景呢!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-11 01:42:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

庆宏,丽日晴天,雪景真如画图描!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-12 01:51:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

問好冷雨!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-12 05:01:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
白水好!身居加西远眺洛基山美景呢!


好羡慕老师,NO, 应该说嫉妒 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2012-11-12 08:45:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云兄一七令,妙!文字堆砌得宛如一座巍峨的雪山,
给人以视觉之美,再加诗人形象地描绘,形神兼备,
则更觉美了。问好白云兄!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-12 11:53:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

景美,诗意更美!
问好白云兄。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-13 07:13:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝白水!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-13 07:16:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄兄,这是〔一七令〕的格律美,我是在学习呢。謝謝你的点评!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-13 07:18:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

問好冰清!謝謝你的鼓励!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-16 20:16:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好老师!刚回。先学习。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-17 01:01:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝笑聊!
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