白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
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Posted: 2012-11-10 12:02:42 Post subject: 丽日雪景 |
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. . 一 七 令 . .
嬌 !
風笛 ,
輕撩 。
銀蝶舞 ,
樂逍遥 。
層林素裹 ,
梨花如潮 。
藍天紅日笑 ,
萬里画图描 。
江泛白蓮朵朵 ,
波光分外妖嬈 。
直指青雲三千尺 ,
玉琢冰峰上九霄 ! _________________ 诗中岁月,
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-10 12:24:24 Post subject: |
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雪过天清红日朗,眺远四野俏銀妆。千树万树掛满白雪,若梨花盛放如潮。一陣清风轻拂,摇落纷飞雪花似蝶舞逍遥。展目看,長河泛起浮蓮朵朵,更显波光分外妖嬈。抬眼望,如玉琢的冰峰,高耸入雲三千尺,直上九霄。真是:丽日雪景俏,万里画图描! _________________ 诗中岁月,
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冷雨 秀才
Joined: 05 Nov 2010 Posts: 439
冷雨Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-10 19:39:14 Post subject: |
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问好白云老师! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-10 22:43:42 Post subject: |
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白云老师好,好想知道您侨居何处?好美的景色,羡慕。 Toronto周边很难看见山,更不要说冰峰了  |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2012-11-11 00:37:06 Post subject: |
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景色秀美。令人难忘。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-11 01:39:31 Post subject: |
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白水好!身居加西远眺洛基山美景呢! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-11 01:42:01 Post subject: |
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庆宏,丽日晴天,雪景真如画图描! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-12 01:51:09 Post subject: |
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問好冷雨! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-12 05:01:02 Post subject: |
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白云闲人 wrote: |
白水好!身居加西远眺洛基山美景呢! |
好羡慕老师,NO, 应该说嫉妒  |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-12 08:45:06 Post subject: |
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白云兄一七令,妙!文字堆砌得宛如一座巍峨的雪山,
给人以视觉之美,再加诗人形象地描绘,形神兼备,
则更觉美了。问好白云兄! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-12 11:53:42 Post subject: |
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景美,诗意更美!
问好白云兄。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-13 07:13:13 Post subject: |
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謝白水! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-13 07:16:25 Post subject: |
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黄兄,这是〔一七令〕的格律美,我是在学习呢。謝謝你的点评! _________________ 诗中岁月,
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-13 07:18:53 Post subject: |
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問好冰清!謝謝你的鼓励! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-16 20:16:04 Post subject: |
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问好老师!刚回。先学习。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-17 01:01:40 Post subject: |
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謝笑聊! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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