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十月

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2012-11-10 10:25:14 Post subject: 十月

十月我一辈子没洗澡了身心俱惫我肺叶的积尘，足以养育一亩地的红薯我等待大雪来洗涤内部的苦楚今天，风有些湿生命凌乱的下沉我突然感觉身体下的脚趾正逐个的枯朽坐骨冰冷脊柱强直雪还没来，我有些耐不及了我一辈子没洗澡了我很脏我沮丧的等待一场痛快淋漓的豪雪 2012/11/11 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2012-11-10 10:52:20 Post subject:

终于又读到你的诗歌了，淋漓尽致的杯中冲浪决不不亚于一场豪雪呢。问好

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Posted: 2012-11-10 11:47:15 Post subject:

等待大雪借物寓情，感觉很美的，欣赏，问好。 _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

金金
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Posted: 2012-11-10 16:28:57 Post subject:

一个字：棒！诗如其名：杯中冲浪 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2012-11-10 18:14:09 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

终于又读到你的诗歌了，淋漓尽致的杯中冲浪决不不亚于一场豪雪呢。问好

好久没动笔了，很抱歉。我缺的是韧劲。
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杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2012-11-10 18:15:16 Post subject:

chenrunmin wrote:

等待大雪
借物寓情，感觉很美的，欣赏，问好。

谢谢，你的诗我比较欣赏。
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Posted: 2012-11-10 18:16:04 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

一个字：棒！

诗如其名：杯中冲浪

问好金金。
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冷雨
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Posted: 2012-11-10 19:09:25 Post subject:

问好！

山城子
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Posted: 2012-11-11 22:31:58 Post subject:

来读杯中冲浪！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

hepingdao
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Posted: 2012-11-12 14:29:24 Post subject:

感觉好极了一起来洗澡: 雪是最好的洗洁剂, 可清除一切害虫 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2012-11-13 03:45:58 Post subject:

感觉很棒,读这样的詩很痛快！ _________________ 坐在方舟中的無用之人天天射落日的倒影

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2012-11-14 09:12:06 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

感觉好极了。
一起来洗澡: 雪是最好的洗洁剂, 可清除一切害虫

很好，雪是最好的东西，他让人心明澈沉淀。同时问好冷雨、山城子和青羊
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