白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
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Posted: 2012-11-09 01:07:10 Post subject: 大风雪 |
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七 律
遍野狂飚肆放纵 ,
咆哮翻滾掃西東 。
排空白雪千重浪 ,
萬馬松缰横豎衝 。
雪助风威更凌厲 ,
风添雪势籠蒼穹 。
沉沉天幕寒流湧 ,
鳥噤鴉藏匿影踪 。 _________________ 诗中岁月,
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2012-11-09 01:16:07 Post subject: |
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够豪放, 风雪横空出世 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-09 01:36:12 Post subject: |
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謝謝島主赏評!
这两天的风雪真大,排空千重浪,万馬横豎衝! _________________ 诗中岁月,
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-09 03:31:25 Post subject: |
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大气磅礴,读起来真痛快  |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2012-11-09 04:38:52 Post subject: |
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| 白云老师古体诗词知识真丰富! |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-09 11:32:39 Post subject: |
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謝白水的勉励! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-09 11:35:17 Post subject: |
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庆宏,謝謝! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-16 20:18:50 Post subject: |
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| 问好老师!先学习。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-17 01:00:56 Post subject: |
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問好笑聊! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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