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PostPosted: 2012-11-09 01:07:10    Post subject: 大风雪 Reply with quote

七 律

遍野狂飚肆放纵 ,
咆哮翻滾掃西東 。
排空白雪千重浪 ,
萬馬松缰横豎衝 。

雪助风威更凌厲 ,
风添雪势籠蒼穹 。
沉沉天幕寒流湧 ,
鳥噤鴉藏匿影踪 。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-09 01:16:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

够豪放, 风雪横空出世
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PostPosted: 2012-11-09 01:36:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝島主赏評!
这两天的风雪真大,排空千重浪,万馬横豎衝!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-09 03:31:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

大气磅礴,读起来真痛快 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2012-11-09 04:38:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云老师古体诗词知识真丰富!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-09 11:32:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝白水的勉励!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-09 11:35:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

庆宏,謝謝!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-16 20:18:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好老师!先学习。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-17 01:00:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

問好笑聊!
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