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韩少君
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Posted: 2012-08-21 23:53:47 Post subject: 七夕三首

《细瓷》 ——看到你就看到了细瓷，或看到了细瓷就想起你。最细腻最光洁的幸福往往不在餐桌上她被层层包裹到处搬运她一生都与食物无缘甚至抚摸她的手都要带上手套她是造物者遗落人间的唯一的月亮一个脸如细瓷的人她被时光所垂涎被众多内心喷涌的热血垂涎被那些忙于竞拍的人反复揣摸《一只小猫在抽屉里睡眠》 ——你又何尝不是我的小猫一只小猫在我的抽屉里睡眠这个人世间最小的孤儿当我打开房门她喵喵的细小的声音很像在试探着叫着爸爸天堂不一定很高，夜晚她就睡在我黑暗的抽屉里却离上帝很近当我怜惜她的时候就会觉得正和她一起接近天堂《爱》比她更好的已经不多了我希望美丽都来抢她善良都来夺她希望那朵云在她的腮边永远绯红那朵花在她的鬓角永不失血永不变白我愿意所有的诗人都来见她冷酷之心也因她变得仁慈如此，我愿意把她送给你们而我，愿意摊开双手对你们说看，她有多好—— _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

hepingdao
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Posted: 2012-08-23 11:20:18 Post subject:

别致的构思,不乏内在的激情 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2012-08-25 22:03:47 Post subject:

少君的诗歌愈发写的好了，细腻，内敛

韩少君
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Posted: 2012-08-26 16:31:53 Post subject:

问候和平岛、白水先生。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

山城子
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Posted: 2012-08-27 17:25:56 Post subject:

天堂不一定很高，夜晚她就睡在我黑暗的抽屉里却离上帝很近当我怜惜她的时候就会觉得正和她一起接近天堂问好少君！——感动！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

青洋
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Posted: 2012-10-03 01:11:40 Post subject:

好詩。 _________________ 坐在方舟中的無用之人天天射落日的倒影

韩少君
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Posted: 2012-10-19 06:20:46 Post subject:

谢过各位！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2012-10-27 01:21:25 Post subject:

《细瓷》之美，眼光之外。欣赏。

金金
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Posted: 2012-11-04 14:22:33 Post subject:

其实你这种无比的自我，正是可欣赏的地方，希望你能继续写这种路子。内敛可信的气度，我想，诗不会亏待你！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

韩少君
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Posted: 2012-11-07 10:10:53 Post subject: xiexie

谢谢风动、金金。我曾被指责疯狂自恋——呵呵。我行我素，顽固到底吧。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2012-11-07 21:22:28 Post subject:

读了《一只小猫在抽屉里睡眠》想说夜晚是个盒子房子是个盒子我们总把自己装在盒子里，有时，我们爬出盒子觅食 _________________ __________________________ 诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

金金
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Posted: 2012-11-08 14:53:12 Post subject:

诗人多自恋，只希望你能摆脱诗中底蕴的冷，让声调提高，美得温暖。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2012-11-08 21:43:50 Post subject:

问好父亲！冷雨来迟了，原谅！

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