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【一世妖娆】(注:非律非绝)
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PostPosted: 2012-11-06 00:54:13    Post subject: 【一世妖娆】(注:非律非绝) Reply with quote

【一世妖娆】
壬辰年九月廿三日,游网络,遇亦灵芊舞。感其性情,乃窃其文题章句,凑成一文,以为诗意。
——题记

凝眸烟雨巷流芳,风舞红尘泪有香。
碧落几缕和研墨,一吻天荒诉离殇。
谁懂薄愁梦如烟,缱绻歌咏万里疆。
亦灵情处最相逢,花开伴蝶飞未央。

2011.11.6
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诗书短文章,潦草乃为狂。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-06 06:49:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

欢迎新朋友!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-06 12:33:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好远狼,以你的文笔稍稍调整一下就是一首很棒的七律。希望读到你更多的作品。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-07 07:23:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
问好远狼,以你的文笔稍稍调整一下就是一首很棒的七律。希望读到你更多的作品。


这里的天上有云,有雪,有风又有雨,地上有岛,有河,有洋,有冰又有水,大家都欢迎你这只远方的狼来这天地间尽情撒欢啊!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-07 17:43:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
欢迎新朋友!
远握,承蒙诸诗友不弃!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-07 17:46:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
问好远狼,以你的文笔稍稍调整一下就是一首很棒的七律。希望读到你更多的作品。
对格律一直不得其法呀。韵倒还好,就是平仄难调啊!!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-07 17:47:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
问好远狼,以你的文笔稍稍调整一下就是一首很棒的七律。希望读到你更多的作品。


这里的天上有云,有雪,有风又有雨,地上有岛,有河,有洋,有冰又有水,大家都欢迎你这只远方的狼来这天地间尽情撒欢啊!
朋友们很热情,远狼在这里感受温暖!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-08 01:31:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

問好远狼!
远狼,你的笔锋很精彩,如果你再研習熟悉一下近体诗的格律章法,就能写出美妙的律诗來,那么诗友間就能有更多的交流互动,则诗中岁月更丰富多彩!有关的近体诗格律,在很多的诗词网站都有登载,可以去流览一下。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-08 04:41:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

远狼 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
问好远狼,以你的文笔稍稍调整一下就是一首很棒的七律。希望读到你更多的作品。
对格律一直不得其法呀。韵倒还好,就是平仄难调啊!!


远狼君,好
或许这个链接有点帮助,虽不是特准确, 不妨试试。
http://oson.ca/cpoetry/check.php

另外,qinghongh 的回帖里的美景全是诗友的笔名 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2012-11-16 20:00:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

欢迎新朋友!

刚回来,迟复致歉!
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