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蝴蝶造爱
孔小虎
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PostPosted: 2012-11-06 17:18:07    Post subject: 蝴蝶造爱 Reply with quote

蝴蝶造爱

孔小虎

蝴蝶
在阳光下的草丛中
造爱
看上去很美很美

我想把这一瞬间
定格
相机刚刚靠近聚焦
甜蜜中的蝴蝶
发现了我的眼睛和镜头
隐私被人类发现
蝴蝶感到害羞
为了不让人类
记录这个场面
蝴蝶立即停止造爱
双双飞起

对不起
蝴蝶
我不是故意的
我只是想把这美的瞬间
保留下来
没想到打扰了你们
以后看到你们造爱
再也不会惊扰你们

你们飞到另一个地方
还会继续造爱吗
希望这次小小的插曲
没有给你们留下伤害

其实 所有的生灵
都有自己不可侵犯的隐私权
我们应该尊重他们

2012-11-6
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PostPosted: 2012-11-06 22:57:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-07 11:55:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

动物的隐私权
记得小时候,孩子们追着狗打

Laughing
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PostPosted: 2012-11-07 21:08:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

想起一些自然主义小说的描写:或者山野之中,或者林草之地,或者溪渠流水之处......性与爱,肉与欲......有首歌唱着"想爱你就爱”.......蝴蝶只是被惊扰的,不用担心——他们是自然态。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-08 02:42:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

選題很有意思。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-08 04:55:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗人的细腻与善良
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PostPosted: 2012-11-08 14:44:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

前边不错,最后两段有点多余
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