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{原创}心河
品玉
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PostPosted: 2007-04-18 20:48:08    Post subject: {原创}心河 Reply with quote

模糊了起点
手中攥住两粒沉沙
一粒是女儿衣兜里滚落的
一粒是我儿时的梦中跳出的
遗失的太多
只这两粒
我紧紧的攥着
在血管壁上爬行 穿梭
一股洪流矗起

淡忘了痕迹
沉沙象两只火把
通往心河的路
没有黑暗
深邃的甬道红灯交错
匍匐或奔跑
心岸的青苔闪烁
万里晴空的信号
我听到了心河
汹涌的涛声
2007.4.19 早晨 Exclamation
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PostPosted: 2007-04-18 21:57:13    Post subject: Re: {原创}心河 Reply with quote

品玉 wrote:
模糊了起点
手中攥住两粒沉沙
一粒是女儿衣兜里滚落的
一粒是我儿时的梦中跳出的
遗失的太多
只这两粒
我紧紧的攥着

在血管壁上爬行 穿梭
一股洪流矗起

淡忘了痕迹
沉沙象两只火把
通往心河的路
没有黑暗
深邃的甬道红灯交错
匍匐或奔跑
心岸的青苔闪烁
万里晴空的信号
我听到了心河
汹涌的涛声

2007.4.19 早晨 Exclamation


再问好 Cool Laughing


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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-04-18 23:24:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗的感觉不错,多写多练多回帖!!祝品玉大姐好!!!!!
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PostPosted: 2007-04-19 17:21:46    Post subject: 问好 Reply with quote

诗不错
感觉独特
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品玉
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PostPosted: 2007-05-07 00:06:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

让弟兄们见笑了!望多提宝贵意见!谢谢!
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