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莹雪
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Posted: 2012-10-31 17:18:06 Post subject: [原创]五绝·重阳

深秋寒菊艳，淡墨绘重阳。把盏茱萸酒，登楼念故乡。

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Posted: 2012-10-31 23:25:00 Post subject:

浓淡有致，问好MM

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Posted: 2012-11-01 02:22:04 Post subject:

久违。问好莹雪！

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Posted: 2012-11-01 04:16:48 Post subject:

赏菊芳、把酒香、赋重阳、念故乡 - 妙诗！問好莹雪！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

qinghongh
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Posted: 2012-11-01 05:56:01 Post subject:

菊艳添墨香，酒醇念故乡！

莹雪
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Posted: 2012-11-02 09:53:10 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

浓淡有致，问好MM

谢谢JJ点评！冬安JJ！

莹雪
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Posted: 2012-11-02 09:55:08 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

久违。
问好莹雪！

您好！
最近忙，所以很少发贴，请您和朋友们见谅！

莹雪
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Posted: 2012-11-02 09:59:16 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

赏菊芳、把酒香、赋重阳、念故乡 - 妙诗！
問好莹雪！

呵呵，大家唱和很热闹，就引发了我诗词之瘾。謝謝點評！
冬安白雲！

莹雪
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Posted: 2012-11-02 10:00:55 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

菊艳添墨香，酒醇念故乡！

谢谢qinghongGG关注！
冬安！

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Posted: 2012-11-02 20:21:34 Post subject:

问好莹雪！寒菊艳深秋，蟹肥馋嘴由。问安举杯酒，望月似天舟。

莹雪
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Posted: 2012-11-03 11:24:40 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

问好莹雪！

寒菊艳深秋，蟹肥巉口由。
问安举杯酒，望月似天舟。

冬安笑卿兄！

晴空弯月游，梦里赋诗幽。
自在书玉笔，安然醉兰舟。

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Posted: 2012-11-03 16:14:10 Post subject:

冬安莹雪MM！莹雪好诗！晴空弯月游，梦里赋诗幽。自在书玉笔，安然醉兰舟。枫红梦远游，醉酒把诗酬。客里多谈笑，心飞天月舟。

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Posted: 2012-11-04 00:20:29 Post subject:

莹雪自在书玉笔，笑聊醉酒把诗酬 - 唱和俱佳！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

莹雪
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Posted: 2012-11-04 09:52:23 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

冬安莹雪MM！

枫红梦远游，醉酒把诗酬。
客里多谈笑，心飞天月舟。

冬安笑卿GG！
回和《五绝·初雪》
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玉花随雨落，金蕊入诗酬。
泼墨迎云雾，扬帆送玉舟。

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Posted: 2012-11-04 19:54:19 Post subject:

问安莹雪妹！端的好诗，赞一个！兰字似出了。或改“归”。不知意下如何？回和一首：笔随心意落，诗泻曲词酬。云雾推开去，南歌响月舟。

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Posted: 2012-11-05 09:09:10 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

问安莹雪妹！端的好诗，赞一个！兰字似出了。或改“归”。不知意下如何？

回和一首：

笔随心意落，诗泻曲词酬。
云雾推开去，南歌响月舟。

谢谢笑卿兄斧正！嘻嘻，临屏回和时，在和朋友对对，没留神就出了 Embarassed

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　　回和《无题》
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诗言寰宇阔，笔述古今幽。
放眼空灵月，胸怀智慧舟。

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Posted: 2012-11-05 19:04:57 Post subject:

莹雪妹的诗读来，韵味十足，且豪放不让须眉！回和：《无题》三江鸥鹭美，五岳柏松幽。灵动同今古，天然智慧舟。

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Posted: 2012-11-06 10:05:06 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

莹雪妹的诗读来，韵味十足，且豪放不让须眉！

回和：《无题》
三江鸥鹭美，五岳柏松幽。
灵动同今古，天然智慧舟。

谢谢笑卿兄唱和！兄过誉了，偶可不敢“不让....”噢！ Razz

回和：《临屏偶成》
弄笔豪情至，临屏雅韵悠。
人生应豁达，境界自清流。

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Posted: 2012-11-16 20:14:17 Post subject:

笑聊寫到: 莹雪妹的诗读来，韵味十足，且豪放不让须眉！回和：《无题》三江鸥鹭美，五岳柏松幽。灵动同今古，天然智慧舟。谢谢笑卿兄唱和！兄过誉了，偶可不敢“不让....”噢！回和：《临屏偶成》弄笔豪情至，临屏雅韵悠。人生应豁达，境界自清流。自古以来多才女，莹雪妹诗成佳作，格调清高，当赞！刚回来，临屏依韵和一首：五绝--豁达境界高挥毫书满桌，韵律自清流。豁达人生路，情怀境界悠。

莹雪
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Posted: 2012-11-17 11:49:30 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

笑聊寫到:
自古以来多才女，莹雪妹诗成佳作，格调清高，当赞！

刚回来，临屏依韵和一首：五绝--豁达境界高

挥毫书满桌，韵律自清流。
豁达人生路，情怀境界悠。

笑卿兄过誉。

回和：
闲吟倾妙趣，偶得绘清流。
苦学诗书理，方能豁达游。

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