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藕的感叹(外3首)
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PostPosted: 2012-10-29 08:20:42    Post subject: 藕的感叹(外3首) Reply with quote

荷招摇
莲风光
只有藕深埋在水下
节越多越深陷于淤泥

抬头 云淡天青
低眉 波平浪静
藕的梦沉睡着
沉睡着 静等水底的惊雷

《电子眼》

每天过来过去
电子眼瞄我一眼再一眼
那一眼里
贮满不屑之意味

我不是公众人物
不怕它窥探我的隐私
公之于众
我也不会一夜成名

它还有一个名字 叫监控
可我不是坏蛋
它蹲守一千年一万年
也抓不到我犯罪的证据

倒是希望它能牢记我
日久生情
有一天 突然对我含情脉脉

《我存下一塘月色》

多年前 我存下一塘月色
连本带息
早该翻番

我欲用它购买一箩荷香
两筐蛙鸣
三车燕舞
还有清波 萤火 流霞

可它严重贬值
除了还能换几两记忆
什么也买不了

我苦心存下的一塘月色
却成为我的苦果

《同学网友》

在茫茫网海里,邂逅
加为好友
频频发来玉照
感叹时光荏苒
年华向老

倘若 有一天相遇
我一定会抛弃世俗之见
大胆上前
一拥而过三十年的风雨

尘世相逢开口笑
人生已到知天命之年
还有什么不能大度
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PostPosted: 2012-10-29 10:29:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

月淡风清, 非常洒脱的文字



荷招摇
莲风光
只有藕深埋在水下
节越多越深陷于淤泥


人生已到知天命之年
还有什么不能大度
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PostPosted: 2012-10-31 06:47:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

最欣赏《电子眼》,诙谐 幽默 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2012-11-04 15:01:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

我喜欢看您的叙事性。
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