笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2012-09-29 21:23:12 Post subject: 绝句-中秋有感 |
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皓月中天思远鸿,举杯劝饮友情同。
迷离花雾轻轻去,敢问冰轮照夜空?!
临屏依韵和庆宏兄诗,并祝师友们中秋快乐! |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2012-09-30 00:53:38 Post subject: |
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笑聊 wrote: |
皓月中天思远鸿,举杯劝饮友情同。
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谢谢笑聊兄和诗。祝笑聊兄中秋佳节快乐! |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2012-09-30 00:54:24 Post subject: |
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笑聊 wrote: |
皓月中天思远鸿,举杯劝饮友情同。
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谢谢笑聊兄和诗,祝笑聊兄中秋佳节快乐! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2012-10-11 10:31:56 Post subject: |
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迷离花雾轻轻去,敢问冰轮照夜空?!
佳句 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2012-10-13 19:28:56 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
迷离花雾轻轻去,敢问冰轮照夜空?!
佳句 |
谢谢白水支持鼓励! |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2012-10-23 07:05:44 Post subject: |
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好诗!也和上一首同韵中秋新作:
金风红叶月朦胧, 挚友新庐秋意浓。
把盏围炉今昔事, 三更唱罢兴无穷。
昔--入声, 兴--去声 |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2012-10-23 09:33:09 Post subject: |
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望冰轮,思远鸿——感动!
感君从意向丹枫,画叶添香不计名。
最是惊风添煦暖,每临霜月共潮生。 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2012-10-23 19:21:55 Post subject: |
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唱和俱佳 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2012-10-24 15:45:57 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
笑聊 wrote: |
皓月中天思远鸿,举杯劝饮友情同。
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谢谢笑聊兄和诗,祝笑聊兄中秋佳节快乐! |
问好庆宏兄!回复迟了致歉。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2012-10-24 15:47:31 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
迷离花雾轻轻去,敢问冰轮照夜空?!
佳句 |
谢谢白水赏评。问好! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2012-10-24 15:51:02 Post subject: |
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秋叶 wrote: |
好诗!也和上一首同韵中秋新作:
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谢谢秋叶兄赐诗!欣赏好诗!致秋祈! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2012-10-24 15:52:25 Post subject: |
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冰清 wrote: |
望冰轮,思远鸿——感动!
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谢谢冰清老师赐诗鼓励!问好! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2012-10-24 15:55:17 Post subject: |
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古韵版需要白水带领大家一起其乐融融! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2012-10-25 02:06:18 Post subject: |
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笑聊 wrote: |
古韵版需要白水带领大家一起其乐融融! |
笑聊君见笑了。古韵的版主,个个都是我的老师。我只不过爱开玩笑,临屏一乐,问候节日。 问好。 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2012-10-25 09:14:33 Post subject: |
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欣赏佳作。问好笑卿兄! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2012-10-30 19:23:30 Post subject: |
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笑聊君见笑了。古韵的版主,个个都是我的老师。我只不过爱开玩笑,临屏一乐,问候节日。 问好。
问好白水!就是希望你和岛主一起带领大家活跃气氛哦!  |
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