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七律-重阳有感（重阳节快乐）

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笑聊
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Posted: 2012-10-20 19:35:02 Post subject: 七律-重阳有感（重阳节快乐）

文/笑聊花稀人去小园空，回首惊魂暮霭中。戏乐青春光景好，韶华似水鬓须蓬。建功立业需年少，老骥知途敢酩疯？徒步登山遥望处，天边正是夕阳红。小改一下。

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Posted: 2012-10-20 22:21:48 Post subject:

问好兄长！

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Posted: 2012-10-20 23:33:12 Post subject:

徒步登高处，笑看夕阳红。问好笑聊！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2012-10-21 00:00:41 Post subject:

青山依旧在，几度夕阳红。

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Posted: 2012-10-21 01:41:01 Post subject:

七律和笑聊《重阳有感》枫叶飘红菊蕊黄，秋深风冷叹炎凉荷锄难掩千张叶，浇水不闻百花香举目雁鸣寻异谷，垂眸鲸舞戏寒洋人间冷暖谁知晓？落日金辉浴北疆

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Posted: 2012-10-21 12:21:59 Post subject:

好诗好和：老骥知途... 落日金辉... ，让人心旷神怡！

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Posted: 2012-10-21 13:31:45 Post subject:

好诗好和 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

笑聊
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Posted: 2012-10-22 06:50:05 Post subject:

冷雨 wrote:

问好兄长！

谢谢！问好冷兄！

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Posted: 2012-10-22 06:51:42 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

徒步登高处，笑看夕阳红。问好笑聊！

问好黄老师！世途人生，不堪回首。

笑聊
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Posted: 2012-10-22 06:53:05 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

青山依旧在，几度夕阳红。

是啊，青山依旧在，几度夕阳红？问好庆宏兄！

笑聊
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Posted: 2012-10-22 08:06:29 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

七律和笑聊《重阳有感》
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问好白水！谢谢和诗！临屏和上一首：

人生冷暖菊能知，又是重阳远望时。
屈指年年今古数，凝眸日日意猿驰。
长空搏击鹰雄在，原野飞奔马拂诗。
体验自由凭想象，抒怀不妨任由之。

白水
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Posted: 2012-10-22 09:01:17 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

七律和笑聊《重阳有感》
...

问好白水！谢谢和诗！临屏和上一首：

人生冷暖菊能知，又是重阳远望时。
屈指年年今古数，凝眸日日意猿驰。
长空搏击鹰雄在，青草飞奔马拂诗。
体验自由凭想象，抒怀不妨任由之。
...

笑聊好文采，临屏草和，见笑 Embarassed

七律《重阳》
江南塞北唱竹枝，曲赋重阳逢此时。
一叶轻舟飞水远，两张宣纸寄枫痴。
杭菊美酒谁人醉？浓墨清流几首诗？
十五偏移不望月，朝阳落日任驰之。

笑聊
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Posted: 2012-10-22 09:35:09 Post subject:

白水好快手，文采又好，使我想起在酷我北美枫中唱和朋友。等一下再和大作，（早饭后出去办点事）。

笑聊
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Posted: 2012-10-22 21:01:29 Post subject:

笑聊好文采，临屏草和，见笑七律《重阳》江南塞北唱竹枝，曲赋重阳逢此时。一叶轻舟飞水远，两张宣纸寄枫痴。杭菊美酒谁人醉？浓墨清流几首诗？十五偏移不望月，朝阳落日任驰之。注：白水用新韵。白水文如海蛎子，助人亦如海蛎子，都是学习的榜样。临屏草和《重阳有感》重阳一曲古今知，中外同胞共此时。避疫登高先圣仿，嘘寒卧雪孝贤慈。月钩撩起半天黑，暮鼓声轻几遍诗。国粹继承人自在，闲聊友谊信由之。小改一下。

笑聊
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Posted: 2012-10-22 21:05:31 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

好诗好和

感谢岛主支持！问好。

白水
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Posted: 2012-10-23 10:38:46 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

笑聊好文采，临屏草和，见笑

七律《重阳》
江南塞北唱竹枝，曲赋重阳逢此时。
一叶轻舟飞水远，两张宣纸寄枫痴。
杭菊美酒谁人醉？浓墨清流几首诗？
十五偏移不望月，朝阳落日任驰之。

注：白水用新韵。

白水文如海蛎子，助人亦如海蛎子，都是学习的榜样。
临屏草和《重阳有感》

重阳一曲古今知，中外同胞共此时。
避疫登高先圣仿，嘘寒卧雪孝贤慈。
月钩撩起半天黑，暮鼓声轻九遍诗。
国粹继承人自在，闲聊友谊信由之。
...

谢谢笑聊和诗，特喜欢这两句：
避疫登高先圣仿，嘘寒卧雪孝贤慈。
体现了中国五千年文明应当传承的美德，令人受益匪浅。
说到海蛎子，是我最喜欢的MM之一，文采飞扬，调皮捣蛋。像小精灵似的，没人抓得住她们。我的文笔比她们差远了。唉！还真想这几个小丫头呢。 Sad

笑聊
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Posted: 2012-10-24 16:15:53 Post subject:

问候白水！古韵版需要您和岛主重视与支持。

白水
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Posted: 2012-10-25 02:14:14 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

问候白水！古韵版需要您和岛主重视与支持。

问好笑聊君。古韵的版主无论文学功底和为人人品都很棒，我该常请教才是 Embarassed

hepingdao
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Posted: 2012-10-30 04:59:19 Post subject:

喜欢笑聊和诗自然贴切 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

笑聊
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Posted: 2012-10-30 19:40:41 Post subject:

古韵版确实需要白水您和岛主参与，带领大家其乐融融！

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