游戏诗歌 秀才
Joined: 21 Jun 2006 Posts: 618 Location: 吉林省和龙市华林路64-12-1号 游戏诗歌Collection |
Posted: 2012-10-15 19:05:29 Post subject: 新下的鸡蛋 |
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新下的鸡蛋
游戏诗歌 作
溜光,水滑
一尘不染
那鸡蛋里孕育一个新的生命
人把鸡蛋当成菜
破壳,用油炒了吃
2012-10-16
于长白山下海兰江畔 |
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青洋 秀才

Joined: 25 Sep 2012 Posts: 342 Location: 溫哥華 青洋Collection |
Posted: 2012-10-16 03:07:50 Post subject: |
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用詞簡單,立意新鮮。 _________________ 坐在方舟中的無用之人天天射落日的倒影 |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2012-10-16 10:17:50 Post subject: |
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对比度大 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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冷雨 秀才
Joined: 05 Nov 2010 Posts: 439
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Posted: 2012-10-16 12:06:23 Post subject: |
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问好! |
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