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五绝《戏鱼》

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白水
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Posted: 2012-04-20 04:26:23 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

你的处女作确实空灵, 是黄老师指点有方哦
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好happy, 谢谢你的鼓励。
黄老师的确教得很好，我是学生中最差的一个了。不过比较爱开玩笑，画的再差也贴出来搞笑而已。没想到钓出朋友们这许多优美的文字，砖头砸出玉来，赚了 Very Happy

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Posted: 2012-04-20 11:30:55 Post subject:

谦虚使人进步哦 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2012-04-20 11:46:15 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

谦虚使人进步哦

难怪你这原本不屑古韵的现在竟出口成章 Wink

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Posted: 2012-04-20 11:51:53 Post subject:

就相互吹捧吧 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2012-07-13 09:43:38 Post subject:

白水诗作风采早已领教，今日才知尚有丹青妙趣。 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

白水
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Posted: 2012-08-11 07:49:18 Post subject:

玩玩而已

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Posted: 2012-08-16 16:22:16 Post subject:

问候白水！临屏学一首：水月柳如风，欢心画友逢。清清何欲为？宇宙在心中。

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Posted: 2012-08-20 14:04:55 Post subject:

白水
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Posted: 2012-08-25 22:26:16 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

问候白水！临屏学一首：
水月柳如风，欢心画友逢。
清清何欲为？宇宙在心中。
...

谢谢笑聊和诗，问好

白水
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Posted: 2012-08-25 22:26:56 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

MM，傻笑什么呢

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Posted: 2012-08-27 02:33:21 Post subject:

白水，人灵，手也巧！

白水
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Posted: 2012-08-27 03:03:29 Post subject:

谢谢冰清另, 刚试了试,我可以回帖

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Posted: 2012-08-28 16:40:25 Post subject:

热闹。。

白水
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Posted: 2012-09-29 09:49:19 Post subject:

问好中秋

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Posted: 2012-09-29 11:10:52 Post subject:

快活神仙；神仙快活！——问候白水：节日更快乐！

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Posted: 2012-09-29 21:24:46 Post subject:

问候白水！中秋快乐！

白水
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Posted: 2012-10-11 10:30:44 Post subject:

谢谢冰清，笑聊。问好

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