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七绝雾花水月

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Posted: 2012-09-12 06:08:26 Post subject: 七绝雾花水月

七绝雾花水月雾里看花花影重，水中望月月朦胧。雾浓水复疑无路，何日云开大道通？

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Posted: 2012-09-12 12:38:18 Post subject:

很久不写古诗了，这个题目很容易入诗，临屏涂鸦一首雾屯山岭掩花红花谢花开痛无踪水弱三千一瓢饮月明两岸又一冬

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Posted: 2012-09-13 06:03:20 Post subject:

好和,谢谢!

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Posted: 2012-09-13 10:01:58 Post subject:

好诗好和。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2012-09-13 10:27:18 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

好诗好和。

谢谢黄老师！

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Posted: 2012-09-15 16:40:16 Post subject:

雾浓水复疑无路，何日云开大道通？结的妙！

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Posted: 2012-09-15 20:09:08 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

雾浓水复疑无路，何日云开大道通？

结的妙！

谢谢笑聊兄欣赏.

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Posted: 2012-09-17 17:23:53 Post subject:

偷偷的欣赏（偶爬上来喽，很费劲地）

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Posted: 2012-09-18 05:16:50 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

偷偷的欣赏（偶爬上来喽，很费劲地 Razz

）

很高兴莹雪MM重回北美枫！谢谢欣赏。

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Posted: 2012-09-29 09:51:21 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

莹雪 wrote:

偷偷的欣赏（偶爬上来喽，很费劲地 Razz

）

很高兴莹雪MM重回北美枫！谢谢欣赏。

莹雪，qinghongh
中秋愉快

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Posted: 2012-09-29 10:31:26 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

莹雪 wrote:

偷偷的欣赏（偶爬上来喽，很费劲地 Razz

）

很高兴莹雪MM重回北美枫！谢谢欣赏。

莹雪，qinghongh
...

也祝你中秋快乐！

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Posted: 2012-09-29 10:59:41 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

七绝雾花水月
雾里看花花影重，水中望月月朦胧。
雾浓水复疑无路，何日云开大道通？
...

雾花水月——有境有意，好诗思！
中秋节快乐！

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Posted: 2012-09-29 19:40:09 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

七绝雾花水月
雾里看花花影重，水中望月月朦胧。
雾浓水复疑无路，何日云开大道通？
...

雾花水月——有境有意，好诗思！
...

也祝冰清老师中秋佳节快乐！

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Posted: 2012-09-29 21:21:08 Post subject:

皓月中天思远鸿，举杯劝饮友情同。迷离花雾轻轻去，敢问冰轮照夜空？！临屏依韵和诗，并祝师友中秋快乐！

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Posted: 2012-10-21 05:32:51 Post subject:

和得妙。 _________________ 坐在方舟中的無用之人天天射落日的倒影

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Posted: 2012-10-23 06:42:44 Post subject:

唱和俱佳！

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Posted: 2012-10-23 08:08:36 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

皓月中天思远鸿，举杯劝饮友情同。
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谢谢笑聊兄和诗！

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Posted: 2012-10-23 08:09:30 Post subject:

青洋 wrote:

和得妙。

谢谢青洋诗友来读。

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Posted: 2012-10-23 08:09:59 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

唱和俱佳！

谢谢秋叶兄欣赏。

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