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《一剪梅——寄友人》
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PostPosted: 2012-09-25 13:30:22    Post subject: 《一剪梅——寄友人》 Reply with quote

一剪梅

寄友人

东望故国海连天,不堪岁月,白发三千。犹记萧瑟梧桐雨,细语深巷,风卷黄叶。
曾经壮志吞日月,醉书狂草,直问青天。书生意气今何在?尘满古琴,花落阶前。
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PostPosted: 2012-09-26 07:36:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

吳文英
遠目傷心樓上山。愁裏長眉。別後蛾鬟。暮雲低壓小欄杆。教問孤鴻。因甚先還。
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瘦倚溪橋梅夜寒。雪欲消時。淚不禁彈。剪成釵勝待歸看。春在西窗。燈火更闌。
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周邦彥
一翦梅花萬樣嬌。斜插疏枝。略點梅梢。輕盈微笑舞低回。何事樽前。拍手相招。
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夜漸寒深酒漸消。袖裏時聞。玉釧輕敲。城頭誰恁促殘更。銀漏何如。且慢明朝。
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钦定词谱

一剪梅【一剪梅】


双调小令,六十字,上下片各三平韵。每句并用平收,声情低抑。亦有句句叶韵者。



【定格】
例词:1:李清照《一剪梅(红藕香残玉簟秋)》    
中仄平平中仄平(韵)。
红藕香残玉簟秋。
中仄平平,中仄平平(韵)。
轻解罗裳,独上兰舟。
中平中仄仄平平,中仄平平,中仄平平(韵)。
云中谁寄锦书来?雁字回时,月满西楼。


中仄平平中仄平(韵)。
花自飘零水自流。
中仄平平,中仄平平(韵)。
一种相思,两处闲愁。
中平中仄仄平平,中仄平平,中仄平平(韵)。
此情无计可消除,才下眉头,却上心头。

龙榆生《诗词格律》

东望故国海连天,不堪岁月,白发三千。犹记萧瑟梧桐雨,细语深巷,风卷黄叶。
古:平通仄仄仄平平 通平仄仄 仄仄通平 通仄平仄平平仄 仄仄通仄 平通平仄  ◆叶【入声十六叶】
今:平仄仄平仄平平 仄平仄仄 平通平平 平仄平仄平平仄 仄仄平仄 平仄平通  ◆叶【二波,o,e,uo】【三皆,ie,üe】
曾经壮志吞日月,醉书狂草,直问青天。书生意气今何在?尘满古琴,花落阶前。
古:平通仄仄平仄仄 仄平平仄 通仄平平 平平仄仄平平仄 平仄仄平 平仄平平  ◆前【下平一先】
今:平平仄仄平仄仄 仄平平仄 平仄平平 平平仄仄平平仄 平仄仄平 平仄平平  ◆前【八寒,an,ian,uan,üan】
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PostPosted: 2012-09-26 14:00:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝笑聊指點,能否煩勞告訴:"通"和"中"在現代拼音中是什麼音韻。
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PostPosted: 2012-09-26 17:17:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

青洋 wrote:
謝謝笑聊指點,能否煩勞告訴:"通"和"中"在現代拼音中是什麼音韻。


青洋朋友你好,共同学习,互相提高。

词谱中的“中”和“通”分别是:可平可仄(中),一字二读(通),如:望、不等在词韵(词林正韵)诗韵(平水韵)中,分别有二种读声。
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PostPosted: 2012-09-26 23:56:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

非常感謝笑聊先生指點,我只知平仄,而且是按現代漢語拼音來區別平仄,來填詞。一直很想學習規範的詩韻,詞韻,這方面有什麼書可推薦嗎?
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