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qinghongh
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Posted: 2012-07-03 18:13:13 Post subject: 五绝钓翁（外一首）

五绝钓翁（二）绿水黛山间，一只垂钓竿。波横秦汉月，舟系子陵滩。七绝钓翁（一）清心作饵月为钩，垂钓江河万古流。将相君王如过鲫，品其滋味在心头。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2012-07-04 11:19:53 Post subject:

悠然垂钓，巧于用典。欣赏。 “清心昨饵”，“昨”是否是“作”之误？ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2012-07-05 05:42:17 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

悠然垂钓，巧于用典。欣赏。
“清心昨饵”，“昨”是否是“作”之误？

谢谢黄老师欣赏。“昨”正是键误，谢谢黄老师指正。

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Posted: 2012-07-06 01:57:11 Post subject:

另外，“横”改为“含”，“条”改为“根”新改如下：五绝钓翁（二）（外一首）绿水黛山间，一根垂钓竿。波含秦汉月，舟系子陵滩。

冰清
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Posted: 2012-07-09 01:00:50 Post subject:

庆弘好诗思。只几句，就把襟怀坦露无遗。

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Posted: 2012-07-09 07:33:46 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

庆弘好诗思。
只几句，就把襟怀坦露无遗。 Laughing

谢谢冰清老师！

笑聊
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Posted: 2012-08-16 16:07:03 Post subject:

读庆宏兄诗，获益匪浅。深刻！学习了。问候！

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Posted: 2012-08-17 03:26:07 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

读庆宏兄诗，获益匪浅。深刻！学习了。问候！

谢谢笑聊兄!很怀念一起唱和的时光.

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Posted: 2012-08-17 21:45:36 Post subject:

绿水黛山间，一只垂钓竿。波横秦汉月，舟系子陵滩。七绝钓翁（一）清心作饵月为钩，垂钓江河万古流。将相君王如过鲫，品其滋味在心头。欣赏，问好qinghongh诗友。

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Posted: 2012-08-17 22:32:48 Post subject:

谢谢家珍诗友！很高兴又见到诗友了！

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Posted: 2012-08-18 14:10:33 Post subject:

我前段时间也进不了北美枫，昨天笑聊老师把网址给我了，很高兴我又能进来这个网站。谢谢qinghongh老师。

笑聊
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Posted: 2012-08-18 17:00:49 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

读庆宏兄诗，获益匪浅。深刻！学习了。问候！

谢谢笑聊兄!很怀念一起唱和的时光.

是呀，庆宏兄，我也怀念。

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Posted: 2012-08-28 16:47:37 Post subject:

逍遥钓翁。。捣乱一个： A man fishes beside a pond Enjoying the scenery but catching none He goes home merrily at sundown To see his family with faces long

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Posted: 2012-08-29 05:43:05 Post subject:

sliu6 wrote:

逍遥钓翁。。
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谢谢诗友！英文诗很不错。

笑聊
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Posted: 2012-08-29 20:54:59 Post subject:

清心作饵月为钩，垂钓江河万古流。将相君王如过鲫，品其滋味在心头。成败得失，过眼云烟；世风如此，冷暖人间。再来欣赏并问好！

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Posted: 2012-08-30 09:48:53 Post subject:

再欣赏 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

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Posted: 2012-08-30 10:22:55 Post subject:

问好qinghongh, peace 刚才处理了一下，现在回帖应该没问题了

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Posted: 2012-08-30 10:48:47 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

清心作饵月为钩，垂钓江河万古流。
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谢谢笑聊兄再临。人生既要尽够努力，也应看淡成败得失。附上旧作一首：

七绝和自在飞《钓叟》

一诗一和一杯酒，笑傲人生何惧愁。
挥洒繁星来对弈，是非成败九天留。

自在飞原玉：七绝钓叟
一竿一叟一轻舟，划破云天撞日头。
若是清心能做饵，繁星皓月也吞钩。

笑聊
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Posted: 2012-08-31 16:37:23 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

清心作饵月为钩，垂钓江河万古流。
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谢谢笑聊兄再临。人生既要尽够努力，也应看淡成败得失。附上旧作一首：
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谢庆宏兄赠言！问好。

冰清
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Posted: 2012-09-05 23:05:14 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

清心作饵月为钩，垂钓江河万古流。
...

谢谢笑聊兄再临。人生既要尽够努力，也应看淡成败得失。附上旧作一首：谢谢笑聊兄再临。人生既要尽够努力，也应看淡成败得失。附上旧作一首：

七绝和自在飞《钓叟》

一诗一和一杯酒，笑傲人生何惧愁。
挥洒繁星来对弈，是非成败九天留。

自在飞原玉：七绝钓叟
一竿一叟一轻舟，划破云天撞日头。
若是清心能做饵，繁星皓月也吞钩。
...

豪气凌云！

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