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咏物三首
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PostPosted: 2012-05-02 10:59:44    Post subject: 咏物三首 Reply with quote
咏物三首

一 时钟
时针依序走 日夜不停留
岁月催人老 孜孜莫浪游
二 碗
心中盛岁月 五味尽齐全
何羡千金晏 临流一碗泉
三 剪刀
智叟豪情断乱麻 阿婆妙手铰窗花
秀姑巧做鸳鸯枕 铁剪功高利万家
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PostPosted: 2012-05-02 11:28:29    Post subject: Reply with quote
学习，问好黄老师
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PostPosted: 2012-05-02 13:28:56    Post subject: Reply with quote
黄老师的咏物诗三首，品来首首有味， 学习了。
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2012-05-03 01:13:08    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢岛主和秋叶赏阅。问二位好！
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PostPosted: 2012-05-03 05:39:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
黄老师的咏物诗独具特色。
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PostPosted: 2012-05-03 08:10:02    Post subject: Reply with quote
很浓郁的生活气息
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PostPosted: 2012-05-03 09:02:12    Post subject: Reply with quote
庆宏，白水；谢谢鼓励。
近日得暇，搜寻身边事物，凑成打油，借以练笔，请予指正。
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PostPosted: 2012-05-25 03:57:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
物物都有情。黄兄好诗思！
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PostPosted: 2012-05-25 10:42:06    Post subject: Reply with quote
冰清，谢谢你的鼓励！据说，你已回多伦多，健康状况还好吧？
请多保重。
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