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回望

秋叶
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Posted: 2012-04-21 17:36:49 Post subject: 回望

写了一半的回望一直没空去望，今遵旨白水兄交货，望赐教('') 七律－回望2011 送兔迎龙又一巡，徘徊市道复艰辛。常将碗缽多容饭，偶读诗书少入神。对月衔觞循五柳，迎风冒雨走三秦。我生贫富凭天定，不作东施总效颦。复，缽，一，读---为入声

白水
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Posted: 2012-04-21 22:11:14 Post subject:

秋香妹妹好诗，临屏一乐东施不效效秋香，三笑回眸笑虎王懒舞凌风三尺剑，举杯邀月醉南唐

qinghongh
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Posted: 2012-04-21 23:45:11 Post subject:

一回望，三惆怅。

hepingdao
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Posted: 2012-04-23 11:20:10 Post subject:

秋叶自是经秋霜，穷经济世两茫茫。纵使李杜能再世，安得诗书换暖裳。 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

秋叶
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Posted: 2012-04-29 11:18:55 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

秋香妹妹好诗，临屏一乐 Very Happy

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回眸凌风三尺剑，举杯白水醉南唐

谢谢白水兄和作(' clamping

')，谢谢你去年指点，到访你们西安，领略了王勃的“ 城阙辅三秦，风烟望五津。”的古都风貌。

秋叶
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Posted: 2012-04-29 11:37:46 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

一回望，三惆怅。

谢谢庆宏兄点评，每年回望都有可叹之感啊。

秋叶
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Posted: 2012-04-29 11:40:47 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

秋叶自是经秋霜，穷经济世两茫茫。
纵使李杜能再世，安得诗书换暖裳。

纵使李杜能再世，安得诗书换暖裳。

说的正是，谢谢岛主和作。

秋叶
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Posted: 2012-05-01 05:03:02 Post subject:

岛主，北美枫的网站我原来bookmarkd的现在打开都变成了另外一个网站，请告知。 http://oson.ca/index1.php?o=

hepingdao
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Posted: 2012-05-01 05:15:55 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

岛主，北美枫的网站我原来bookmarkd的现在打开都变成了另外一个网站，请告知。
...

抱歉, 因操作失误,同时,该域名,也已经被大陆屏蔽,我就放弃了

请用

yizitong.com
oson.ca
yizitong.net
oson.ca

thanks

冰清
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Posted: 2012-06-02 09:28:19 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

写了一半的回望一直没空去望，今遵旨白水兄交货，望赐教(' thanks

')

七律－回望2011

送兔迎龙又一巡，徘徊市道复艰辛。
常将碗缽多容饭，偶读诗书少入神。
对月衔觞循五柳，迎风冒雨走三秦。
我生贫富凭天定，不作东施总效颦。

复，缽，一，读---为入声
...

工对，神贤。

老班长厉害！

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