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PostPosted: 2012-04-14 21:49:06    Post subject: 五绝 《戏鱼》 Reply with quote

五绝 《戏鱼》

新柳扶清影,临池弄月圆
憨鱼追响尾,空饵腹难填

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PostPosted: 2012-04-14 21:54:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

昨日与诸诗(文)友聚会时,跟黄老师学作的第一幅画,留此为证,见笑Very Happy Very Happy

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PostPosted: 2012-04-15 01:04:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水好诗。

我们吃饱了喝足了,却用空饵来戏鱼,人啊人!

那新柳,那水中圆月倒是很有意境。 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2012-04-15 01:08:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

“三鳞戏月”画得生动传神,题诗与画,相得益彰。
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PostPosted: 2012-04-15 05:28:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

黑眼睛的苏珊 wrote:
白水好诗。
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的确,月影哪有韭菜盒子好吃。回家后我看着画傻乐 Laughing
还得谢谢你的安排才是,昨天玩得挺高兴的
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PostPosted: 2012-04-15 05:30:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
“三鳞戏月”画得生动传神,题诗与画,相得益彰。


黄老师,昨天辛苦你了,特感谢
我这只是戏作而已,恭候你的大作
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PostPosted: 2012-04-15 11:00:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

三鱼戏月,有点象一家三口嘛。 Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2012-04-15 11:50:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

学一首

嫩柳轻腰舞 池泉映月圆
三鳞翔浅底 婉丽美词填
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PostPosted: 2012-04-16 00:31:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

这幅画淡淡几笔却令人产生无限遐想:

那应该是一个嫩柳新垂,池塘微碧,月明星稀的四月的夜晚。一对玉人临池戏鱼:月儿般明媚的姑娘轻轻地倚在英俊少年的肩头,低声问:“你看那鱼儿象征着什么?”,少年木讷:“看不出来”。姑娘略带羞涩:“一条是我,另一条是你。”“那第三条呢?”“你好傻,当然是我们的孩子了。”姑娘说罢脸儿绯红,月光映在姑娘脸上,越发妩媚动人,少年不由得底下头去,轻轻的一个吻印在姑娘绯红的面颊上。鱼儿摆着尾巴似是击掌。
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PostPosted: 2012-04-16 02:03:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水一幅画,引出画外许多遐想,苏珊想像力也够丰富啊!
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PostPosted: 2012-04-16 06:16:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

跟一首。凑热闹:

明月带清风,三只锦鲤逢。
轻轻浓淡画,游动有无中。
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PostPosted: 2012-04-16 06:53:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
三鱼戏月,有点象一家三口嘛。 Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy


Very Happy 那中间就不是月影,而是一张餐桌,桌上还要摆好多好吃的 Razz
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PostPosted: 2012-04-16 06:54:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
学一首

嫩柳轻腰舞 池泉映月圆
三鳞翔浅底 婉丽美词填


谢谢老师,好清丽的诗
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PostPosted: 2012-04-16 07:05:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

黑眼睛的苏珊 wrote:
这幅画淡淡几笔却令人产生无限遐想:

那应该是一个嫩柳新垂,池塘微碧,月明星稀的四月的夜晚。一对玉人临池戏鱼:月儿般明媚的姑娘轻轻地倚在英俊少年的肩头,低声问:“你看那鱼儿象征着什么?”,少年木讷:“看不出来”。姑娘略带羞涩:“一条是我,另一条是你。”“那第三条呢?”“你好傻,当然是我们的孩子了。”姑娘说罢脸儿绯红,月光映在姑娘脸上,越发妩媚动人,少年不由得底下头去,轻轻的一个吻印在姑娘绯红的面颊上。鱼儿摆着尾巴似是击掌。
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好文笔,好丰富的想象力。欣赏
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PostPosted: 2012-04-16 07:16:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
跟一首。凑热闹:

明月带清风,三只锦鲤逢。
轻轻浓淡画,游动有无中。
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好诗。
临屏草和,见笑Very Happy

花雨沐春风,友朋画苑逢
诗浓匀淡墨,小醉月明中。

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PostPosted: 2012-04-16 14:57:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水兄好诗,临屏和上一首:

黑柳变青影,铁丝似月圆。
条条皆串起,准备晒鱼干。

Laughing Laughing Laughing

另外大作是五言啊。
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PostPosted: 2012-04-16 20:48:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶 wrote:
白水兄好诗,临屏和上一首:
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哈,就是吃神,你的回望呢?
谢谢提醒,那天临屏现打着好玩,把五打成七了,已改 Razz
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PostPosted: 2012-04-18 11:37:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

一枝墨柳疑是春,三尾锦鲤巧相逢。
今夕并非中秋夜,谁剪月饼戏诗人。
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PostPosted: 2012-04-19 06:18:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
一枝墨柳疑是春,三尾锦鲤巧相逢。
今夕并非中秋夜,谁剪月饼戏诗人。


WOW, 好文笔。
答问:是一个叫张静的大美女,把月饼一剪两半变韭菜盒子了,特好吃 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2012-04-19 11:49:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

你的处女作确实空灵, 是黄老师指点有方哦
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