老山
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 Posted: 2012-02-27 22:55:12 Post subject: 吟 |
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吟
叶嫩芽黄草色新，柳亭漫步诵诗文。
春风又绿江南岸，吟到绿时倍有神。 |
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笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2012-02-28 03:50:30 Post subject: |
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| 品味再三，吟诵有味。尤其：吟到绿时倍有神。感觉爽！ |
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qinghongh
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Joined: 14 Oct 2007
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| Posted: 2012-02-28 13:41:57 Post subject: |
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| 古诗出新。 |
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白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
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| Posted: 2012-02-29 10:44:33 Post subject: |
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一派江南新春怡景，吟咏令人倍感精神！
老山，〝新、神〞为〝十一真〞，〝文〞为〝十二文〞，赋詞则通韵，吟诗却不同部呢。
問好老山！
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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老山
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| Posted: 2012-03-01 22:54:04 Post subject: |
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问好笑聊 qinghongh 白云闲人，谢谢诸位的点评。
白云老师说得对，新、神与文不在同一韵部，近些年来不少人开始用“词韵”和“宽韵（赵京战编）”写诗了，我也就学着写起来了。谢谢你的关心。 |
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