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				|  发表于: 2007-04-17 10:17:21    发表主题: American Zen by Ray McNiece HAIKU - 3 |   |  
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				| <> Ray McNiece 
 my shadow in waves
 over limestone shore
 does not wash away
 
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				|  发表于: 2007-04-17 10:35:34    发表主题: |   |  
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				| I met Ray McNiece during the April session on "subTEXT" monthly literary gathering at the basement of Center National Library of Singapore, where
 he was the last and anchoring reciting poet of the night.
 
 This is an event organised by Shu Hoong, a respectable poet/writer
 in Singapore.
 
 These 2 works were extracted from a book - ISBN 0-933087-91-8
 which is supported by Ohio Arts Council;
 < American Zen, A Gathering of Poets >
 Edited with Introduction by Ray McNiece & Larry Smith
 Featuring Zen statements and works of 30 poets.
 
 Published by Bottom Dog Press, Huron, Ohio
 
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 These postings were with verbal understanding from Ray McNiece for
 The purpose of a review to be written by me.
 
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				| my shadow in waves  《》shape of shadow stay constant regardless... over limestone shore  《》a material easily deformed by water/hydro-actions
 does not wash away  《》contrast of shadow versus limestone yield aesthetic result
 
 The poet's shadow protrayed his determination in pursuing the context of ZEN..
 
 In his own word during a duscussion - ZEN is a verb not a noun...
 
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	  | my shadow in waves  《》shape of shadow stay constant regardless... over limestone shore  《》a material easily deformed by water/hydro-actions
 does not wash away  《》contrast of shadow versus limestone yield aesthetic result
 
 The poet's shadow protrayed his determination in pursuing the context of ZEN..
 
 In his own word during a duscussion - ZEN is a verb not a noun...
 
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 Yes, determination.
 
 对作者来说,是他对禅的不懈的追求;对其他读者来说,也可以解释为各自对某一事物或信念的执着的追求吧。
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				| my no not nowe ? she is troduce what , speak please. _________________
 我是个平凡的人,但我喜欢在平凡的日子里做不平凡的事情,每个人都可以这么来作去认为自己的存在。
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