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七律 五律 诉衷情令
海蛎子
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PostPosted: 2012-02-16 20:38:31    Post subject: 七律 五律 诉衷情令 Reply with quote

山屏衣结暖寒逢,只见枯黄不见红。
树舞垂条存滴泪,岩流细水欲拉风。
放鹰纵犬犹堪复,顺手牵羊岂是空。
信矣疏狂先韵俗,哀哉穷困后诗工。

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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2012-02-17 13:08:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

在下愚钝,读海蛎子詩,有时竟不能了然于胸,难于达诂也!
这首无题七律,亦耐人寻味。结句道出了“疏狂韵俗”“穷困
詩工”的作詩现象。
插图也十分有趣:小猫灌水有宏才,不知坛子漏洞开!
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喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰
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海蛎子
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PostPosted: 2012-02-17 14:01:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
在下愚钝,读海蛎子詩,有时竟不能了然于胸,难于达诂也!
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黄老师客气了,最近我浏览了几个网站,看了一些诗词作品,这首七律算作读贴有感吧 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2012-02-17 17:12:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

漏点好, 要不小猫不来了 Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2012-02-18 14:41:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
漏点好, 要不小猫不来了 Very Happy Very Happy


好玩儿,好玩儿 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2012-02-18 14:43:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

梅蕊娇寒野,冰凌暖故溪。
风清摇曳瘦,云淡放飞低。
枕石天相对,卧烟仙与齐。
泉潭犹可探,只要过幽蹊。

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PostPosted: 2012-02-18 17:24:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

海蛎子 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
漏点好, 要不小猫不来了 Very Happy Very Happy


好玩儿,好玩儿 Laughing


什么好玩 Confused 好吧,给MM个好玩的, 临屏写的,不准笑。

风雪横山野,凝眸睨小溪。
柳眉逐月远,杏眼追云低。
幽谷惊竹秀,京城叹梦奇。
推窗逢倩影,何必辟新蹊。
(MM的靓照) Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2012-02-19 03:29:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
海蛎子 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
漏点好, 要不小猫不来了 Very Happy Very Happy


好玩儿,好玩儿 Laughing


什么好玩 Confused 好吧,给MM个好玩的, 临屏写的,不准笑。
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姐姐,就是你说的“漏点”好玩儿呀 Laughing

姐姐写的好像不是我,俺不僻新蹊 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2012-02-19 03:32:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

潭幽溪静爱之真,白水漱粼粼。
行行坐坐凝伫,此处最销魂。

深吸气,慢摇臀,特精神。
吹衣小径,再三回首,已是黄昏。

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PostPosted: 2012-02-21 03:49:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

海蛎子 wrote:
梅蕊娇寒野,冰凌暖故溪。
风清摇曳瘦,云淡放飞低。
枕石天相对,卧烟仙与齐。
泉潭犹可探,只要过幽蹊。



哈哈,好灵动的诗思。换个角度依韵一首《看图说话》

咏山石
大石知时趣,营围作子堤。
纵横凭劲节,俯仰相黄犀。
应许壅门足,只缘病草齐。
别看洼水少,泉壑自成蹊。
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PostPosted: 2012-02-26 13:39:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

坐沙发 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2012-02-29 10:33:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
哈哈,好灵动的诗思。换个角度依韵一首《看图说话》

咏山石
大石知时趣,营围作子堤。
纵横凭劲节,俯仰相黄犀。
应许壅门足,只缘病草齐。
别看洼水少,泉壑自成蹊。


冰清老师好诗!谢谢冰清老师的教诲 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2012-02-29 10:34:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
坐沙发 Very Happy


姐姐,沙发该坐,面包也得吃 Laughing
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