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北京冬日素描五则
老山
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PostPosted: 2012-02-14 17:16:54    Post subject: 北京冬日素描五则 Reply with quote

北京冬日素描五则
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万里晴空日照长, 高楼鳞次泛崇光。
行人但刺寒风骨, 原是冬来冷太阳。

寒风呼啸扫冬林, 唯现冰枝与树根。
但看家中供暖气, 花红叶绿一庭春。

庭院桃花别样红, 疑为春色到京城。
踏香不见蜂蝶至, 知是园丁造假功。

裹头藏嘴避风沙, 马褂长袍两袖插。
路上行人问爷好, 姑娘误作老人家。

稚子岂知风是刀, 也随姥姥等公交。
寒飑刺面还摧泪, 只把嫩肤贴老腰。
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2012-02-14 19:10:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

北京冬日素描,如见其人,如闻其声,生动传神。
问好老山!
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冰清
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PostPosted: 2012-02-14 19:48:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈哈,老山兄。很有情趣的一组!
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PostPosted: 2012-02-15 13:54:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

生动冬日景。
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老山
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PostPosted: 2012-02-17 16:30:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢黄洋界冰清qinghongh的点评,并向你们学习。
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2012-02-20 01:34:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

读素描一组,知老山兄笔下情景交融。
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