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七律--元宵普庆步马老《壬辰开岁日四家漏夜联句》韵
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PostPosted: 2012-02-10 21:27:25    Post subject: 七律--元宵普庆步马老《壬辰开岁日四家漏夜联句》韵 Reply with quote
马老新春好！

读到好诗，难免手痒，年前答应您老唱和一番。今日就临屏一首《元宵普庆》次韵马老：

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五彩缤纷生紫烟，良宵佳节礼回千。
推杯换盏呼兄弟，作画吟诗赞赵燕。
隐月迷蒙观有限，喑箫断续话无边。
可怜今夜有遗憾，总觉心思难达天。

注 ：缺月遗憾

草就一首，还望马老斧正！



附马俊祥老师原玉：

感事步和《壬辰开岁日四家漏夜联句》

谁云往事已如烟，会战难行路八千。
历险出师征朔漠，分忧受命战幽燕。
油龙降在昆山下，气虎擒来渤海边。
还是神州春水暖，礼花爆竹闹喧天！


注：油龙句 指新疆石油大会战
气虎句 指西气东输、气化京津冀
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PostPosted: 2012-02-11 06:35:11    Post subject: Reply with quote
新年唱和，美意连连。笑聊兄新春好！
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PostPosted: 2012-02-11 07:32:07    Post subject: Reply with quote
“可怜今夜有遗憾，总觉心思难达天。 ”

人生常有不如意，佳节一逢尽忘忧。元宵节快乐！
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PostPosted: 2012-02-11 19:25:02    Post subject: Reply with quote
可怜今夜有遗憾，总觉心思难达天。

欣赏唱和联句
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PostPosted: 2012-02-15 19:04:49    Post subject: Reply with quote
呼兄弟，话无边。何等情怀！赞！
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PostPosted: 2012-02-20 01:56:25    Post subject: Reply with quote
黄洋界 wrote:
新年唱和，美意连连。笑聊兄新春好！


黄老师新春好！谢谢赏读点评！

真不知论坛一会儿跳走，一会儿跳走。很难上。跟帖至少回二次。
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PostPosted: 2012-02-20 01:59:08    Post subject: Reply with quote
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“可怜今夜有遗憾，总觉心思难达天。 ”
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问候庆宏兄！谢谢赏评鼓励！
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PostPosted: 2012-02-20 02:03:37    Post subject: Reply with quote
影沉寒水 wrote:
可怜今夜有遗憾，总觉心思难达天。

欣赏唱和联句


谢谢寒水兄提读赏评！
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PostPosted: 2012-02-20 02:07:11    Post subject: Reply with quote
冰清 wrote:
呼兄弟，话无边。何等情怀！赞！


冰清老师新春好！

谢谢赏读点评！
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