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●七绝•步笑聊韵
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PostPosted: 2012-01-30 21:06:54    Post subject: ●七绝•步笑聊韵 Reply with quote

七绝•步笑聊韵

●原玉:观仙人图

风尘嬉戏在人间,笑傲江湖是众仙。
日月精华采集去,吟诗敢不上云天!

陆游步笑聊韵

此身真在画图间,不学空门不学仙。
莫笑吟哦无阙日,一壶聊醉嫩寒天。

●原玉:唱和北美枫

粉荷郁郁吐馨香,儒雅吟诗韵满堂。
回首平添愁几缕,何时赋得好文章?

陆游步笑聊韵

菊残衫袂尚余香,十里疏鈡到野堂。
半世学骚终不近,帘通风月索平章。

●原玉:咏兰

足音空谷不临门,偏喜幽姿独善身。
山雨劲风才洗髓,清香弥漫晚来春。

杜甫步笑聊韵

群山万壑赴荆门,何异飘飘托此身。
丛菊两开他日泪,故园犹得见残春。

●原玉:欢聚北美枫

兄台妙笔写春秋,暖意随诗再起头。
吟出惊天豪气句,相逢异地笑声留。

大小太白戏步笑聊韵

峨眉山月半轮秋,崔颢题诗在上头。
三十年间行万里,溪山好处即迟留。

●原玉:和白水诸诗友

白水悠悠古韵长,山城碧翠夏清凉。
玉蟾华吐辉天下,美誉和诗同入堂。

唐太宗领唱步笑聊韵

独叹青山别路长,广陵台殿已荒凉。
风尘荏苒音书绝,骤雨旋风声满堂。
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PostPosted: 2012-01-30 21:07:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

陆游步笑聊韵



此身真在画图间,(《剑南诗稿》889页)

不学空门不学仙。(《剑南诗稿》579页)

莫笑吟哦无阙日,(《剑南诗稿》556页)

一壶聊醉嫩寒天。(《剑南诗稿》520页)
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PostPosted: 2012-01-30 21:09:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

发言:旧版书生
- 第:2 楼

此身真在画图间,
不学空门不学仙。
莫笑吟哦无阙日,
一壶聊醉嫩寒天。
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先生早上好并问好陆游先生~~
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PostPosted: 2012-01-30 21:10:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

陆游未在家,唐琬代夫君谢谢旧版书生小朋友!
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PostPosted: 2012-01-30 21:11:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

陆游附注:中原沦陷前,吾曾在《红楼梦》中看到关于“平章”的句子,例如:
第三十七回,秋爽斋偶结海棠社,蘅芜苑夜拟菊花题:在讨论建诗社的时候,宝玉道:“这是一件正经大事,大家鼓舞起来,不要你谦我让的.各有主意自管说出来大家平章.宝姐姐也出个主意, 林妹妹也说个话儿。”
第三十八回,林潇湘魁夺菊花诗 薛蘅芜讽和螃蟹咏:林黛玉夺魁的菊花诗的《咏菊》末句:“一从陶令平章后,千古高风说到今。”
兹借用曹雪芹先生二字,用毕即物归原主。
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PostPosted: 2012-01-30 21:13:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

陆游步笑聊韵

菊残衫袂尚余香,(《剑南诗稿》975页)
十里疏鈡到野堂。(《剑南诗稿》460页)
半世学骚终不近,(《剑南诗稿》847页)
帘通风月索平章。(《剑南诗稿》485页)
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PostPosted: 2012-01-30 21:14:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

杜甫步笑聊韵

群山万壑赴荆门,(《全唐诗》缩印本568页)
何异飘飘托此身。(《全唐诗》缩印本581页)
丛菊两开他日泪,(《全唐诗》缩印本567页)
故园犹得见残春。(《全唐诗》缩印本560页)
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PostPosted: 2012-01-30 21:18:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

发言:女人嗑瓜子
- 第:9 楼

不学空门不学仙。——激赏此句~~
半世学骚终不近,——哈哈~~
陆游说得多好啊~~
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PostPosted: 2012-01-30 21:19:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

随意嗑瓜子嗑出来的,怕人笑话,故托名陆游。试想他姓陆的能吐出我这样的瓜子皮来么?
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PostPosted: 2012-01-30 21:20:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

大小太白戏步笑聊韵

峨眉山月半轮秋,(《唐诗鉴赏辞典》275页)
崔颢题诗在上头。(《苕溪渔隐丛话》前集卷五)
三十年间行万里,(《剑南诗稿》654页)
溪山好处即迟留。(《剑南诗稿》693页)

陆游当时曾有“小太白”之称。
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PostPosted: 2012-01-30 21:23:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2012-01-31 13:33:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

随意嗑瓜子,集句好詩章。
问候盈枝兄新春快乐!
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PostPosted: 2012-02-01 17:54:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
随意嗑瓜子,集句好詩章。
问候盈枝兄新春快乐!

给黄先生拜个晚年!祝龙年阖家安康!并祝元宵佳节快乐!
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PostPosted: 2012-02-01 17:54:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
随意嗑瓜子,集句好詩章。
问候盈枝兄新春快乐!

给黄先生拜个晚年!祝龙年阖家安康!并祝元宵佳节快乐!
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PostPosted: 2012-02-01 17:56:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

●原玉:和白水诸诗友

白水悠悠古韵长,山城碧翠夏清凉。
玉蟾华吐辉天下,美誉和诗同入堂。

唐太宗领唱步笑聊韵

独叹青山别路长,广陵台殿已荒凉。
风尘荏苒音书绝,骤雨旋风声满堂。
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PostPosted: 2012-02-01 17:58:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

唐太宗领唱步笑聊韵

独叹青山别路长,(太宗)
广陵台殿已荒凉。(李煜)
风尘荏苒音书绝,(杜甫)
骤雨旋风声满堂。(岑参)

——各句分别见于《全唐诗》24页、36页、562页、462页)
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PostPosted: 2012-02-03 03:32:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

给李老师拜个晚年!把诗圣先哲们都搬了出来。学生只有学习的份。谢谢老师集成许多步韵诗。收藏了!
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