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七律•流年（新韵）

影沉寒水
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Posted: 2012-01-19 01:53:58 Post subject: 七律•流年（新韵）

七律•流年（新韵）悲欢似酒佐流年，何望身轻顾影闲？一路风尘鞭瘦马，三秋驿站帽低檐。担心气骨折腰上，因梦莼鲈走浪尖。怀旧山形斟逝水，夕阳独照倚栏杆。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

黄洋界
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Posted: 2012-01-19 07:50:02 Post subject:

流年虽不利，身轻意自闲。祝君新年行好运！结句奇妙！“怀旧山形斟逝水，夕阳独照倚栏杆”，一个“斟”字，一个“倚”字，意味深长。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

qinghongh
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Posted: 2012-01-19 15:50:51 Post subject:

但有悲欢将酒佐，风尘瘦马却奔前。

影沉寒水
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Posted: 2012-01-20 02:39:48 Post subject:

问好二位谢谢评读 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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