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绝句-咏梅唱和

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-12-15 02:39:41 Post subject: 绝句-咏梅唱和

文/笑聊临屏叠前韵咏梅和：寒冬练就喜迎风，暗许蕴香在此中。无意争春添杂念，清芳自是世留同。附憩园农夫原玉：炼就凌寒雪里红，临园每赞性情中。春花秋谢香成律，再等新梅煮茶浓。

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Posted: 2011-12-15 02:56:47 Post subject:

无意争春添杂念欣赏唱和 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2011-12-15 04:47:15 Post subject:

读笑卿句乱凑一冬过后又一冬，逋老徜徉此园中。我本嶙峋多廋骨，雍容安得与君同？ _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

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Posted: 2011-12-16 02:31:11 Post subject:

问候游版！临屏依韵-咏梅和：金钩夜幕挂天空，疏影横斜虬乱笼。霜雪平添多少色，年年只为报春同。

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Posted: 2011-12-17 05:12:56 Post subject:

清芳飘出诗词来。

SLIU
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Posted: 2011-12-20 20:09:04 Post subject:

誉冠压顶雪里红孑依瘦枝怎奈冬茫茫天地无颜色款款心事说与风

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Posted: 2011-12-21 20:30:41 Post subject:

影沉寒水 wrote:

无意争春添杂念

欣赏唱和

谢谢寒水兄提读点评！问好。

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Posted: 2011-12-21 20:31:58 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

清芳飘出诗词来。

谢谢庆宏兄赏评！问好。

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Posted: 2011-12-21 20:39:43 Post subject:

sliu6 wrote:

誉冠压顶雪里红
孑依瘦枝怎奈冬
茫茫天地无颜色
款款心事说与风

临屏咏梅再和：

无意争春闹，平和冷艳笼。
百花开放日，悄隐笑天穹。

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Posted: 2011-12-22 16:02:43 Post subject:

怜梅生不逢时恰冷冬横斜难支叶亦空天若有情怜心起莫教孤影饮寒风

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Posted: 2011-12-22 17:18:56 Post subject:

sliu6 wrote:

怜梅

生不逢时恰冷冬
横斜难支叶亦空
天若有情怜心起
莫教孤影饮寒风

莫教孤影饮寒风，铁划银钩香气浓。
何惧严冬霜雪侵，欣添素色几抹红。

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Posted: 2011-12-23 21:47:27 Post subject:

欣添素色几抹红巧装枝头恰淡浓愿顶寒霜伴洁雪不为戏蝶展娇容

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Posted: 2011-12-26 03:11:21 Post subject:

端的好诗，把梅的傲气展露了出来：不为戏蝶展娇容倒是寒霜做浅梦虬抖枝颤风作怪吹歪瑟瑟艳娇红

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Posted: 2011-12-30 02:37:37 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

sliu6 wrote:

怜梅

生不逢时恰冷冬
横斜难支叶亦空
天若有情怜心起
莫教孤影饮寒风

莫教孤影饮寒风，铁划银钩香气浓。
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接庆宏兄：

欣添素色几处红？一抹夕阳斜送风。
孤影难逢知己少，情怀无限为春衷。

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