聽雲館主 秀才
Joined: 03 Mar 2007 Posts: 361 Location: Canada 聽雲館主Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-15 18:30:59 Post subject: 七律 山居 |
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七律 山居
腕底山川亦可家,劉郎居處幾桃花?
興酣聊潑胸中墨,悶甚惟斟月下茶。
僻地堪招梅鶴友,寒天略惜水雲賒。
平生悔借南柯枕,走馬歸來鬢已華。 _________________ 壇前易解拈花意 席上難逢顧曲心 |
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梅影三叠 秀才
Joined: 06 Feb 2007 Posts: 203
梅影三叠Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-15 21:16:50 Post subject: |
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有陶令之风:) |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-16 07:41:48 Post subject: |
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情怀豁达,使人感奋。
章法、运笔、炼字的功夫也令人佩服。 |
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聽雲館主 秀才
Joined: 03 Mar 2007 Posts: 361 Location: Canada 聽雲館主Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-16 15:04:38 Post subject: |
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多謝樓上二位詞長賜評! _________________ 壇前易解拈花意 席上難逢顧曲心 |
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