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七律新年怀友

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-12-27 17:25:51 Post subject: 七律新年怀友

七律新年怀友历雪寒梅花劲放风轻月淡送芳馨明窗净几观新画静夜青灯读古经旧友殷殷存高誼新朋济济暖空庭神闲气定勤珍重蜀水巴山满目青 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2011-12-27 17:43:13 Post subject:

谈定黄老师，悠悠书画情。

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Posted: 2011-12-27 19:39:40 Post subject:

悠悠书画情! 新年快乐!! _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-12-27 20:19:09 Post subject:

学习工稳律诗，祝新年快乐！

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Posted: 2011-12-28 02:17:59 Post subject:

悠悠书画情! 欣赏好律，问候黄洋界老师，祝你新年快乐！

影沉寒水
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Posted: 2011-12-28 03:01:45 Post subject:

句式太雷同了 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-12-28 07:44:48 Post subject:

謝庆宏，连南河，笑聊，宁家珍的鼓励，并祝新年好! 謝寒水兄指出本詩句式雷同的忌病，特别是二，三联，句式雷同是写诗的一忌，以后当努力避免。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2011-12-28 20:16:45 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

七律新年怀友
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七律新年怀友

历雪寒梅花劲放风轻月淡送芳馨
明窗净几观新画静夜青灯读古经
旧友殷殷存高誼新朋济济暖空庭
神闲气定勤珍重蜀水巴山满目青

黄老师大作虽然用句平白，但都是写个人生活体验，二三联也并不合掌，拜读了。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-12-29 17:10:47 Post subject:

谢谢秋叶评阅。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

冰清
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Posted: 2011-12-30 03:48:11 Post subject:

明窗净几静夜青灯殷殷高誼济济新朋赏读。问候并祝福黄兄新年吉祥安康！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-12-30 06:35:43 Post subject:

谢谢賞读！多日不见，近来可好？问候并祝福您安康吉祥！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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