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祭奠：消逝在夏天的三个女人（投稿第三期）

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Posted: 2007-02-07 19:03:38 Post subject: 祭奠：消逝在夏天的三个女人（投稿第三期）

祭奠：消逝在夏天的三个女人文/梅影三叠 1. 《井里的荷花》那个夏天，荷花迟迟不肯绽红那个夜晚，蛙声久久不肯停歇表姐，是谁把你推到井沿天空落下困惑的雨除了接连生下三个女儿姐啊，你还有什么心事无处诉说背影中隐藏了几多泪痕生于七月，又归于七月 25岁的生命绽放成一朵井里的荷花 2.《小脚与农药》一双黑布鞋，颤巍巍的小脚大声叫着我的乳名枕头底下摸出久藏的食品早逝的外公、“跑反”的故事、夏夜的蒲扇童年于我，是一个幸福的名词外婆，艰难踩上七十级台阶阳光照耀您的银发，灿烂金黄而世传的婆媳纠纷，三餐相佐终在那一年夏天，您穿戴整齐枯瘦的手指，伸向一瓶农药后来再没有任何故事。您最疼爱的外孙女每年，把泪水洒在矮矮的坟茔 3.《六月雪》归雁早已上路。母亲，您说过等我！病魔却抹去您与世界最后一丝联系分明听到您喉头有风一样的叹息却不肯睁眼喊我一声满天乌云，心儿冰凉岁月的雪花飘落，无休无止冻结女儿所有的夏天。从此站台空旷，季节荒凉母亲，我只有打碎记忆，遍地寻找您的声音（注：“跑反”：是指日寇侵略时人们的逃难。）。。。。。

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Posted: 2007-02-07 20:16:06 Post subject:

好象是真事读了让人难过 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-02-08 19:54:57 Post subject:

梅子啊，这几个好揪心呢,愿你快乐些.

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Posted: 2007-02-09 09:31:51 Post subject:

六月雪，很冷．喜欢的诗．问好梅：） _________________ 木容暮又寸博客

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Posted: 2007-02-09 11:09:34 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

好象是真事
读了让人难过

是啊，深有同感。
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Posted: 2007-02-09 22:00:26 Post subject:

观念陈旧，伦理丧失，贫穷疾病，制造了三个悲剧！问好梅影！

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Posted: 2007-03-04 22:56:56 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

好象是真事
读了让人难过

是真事，谢谢阅读

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Posted: 2007-03-04 22:57:46 Post subject:

三色堇 wrote:

梅子啊，这几个好揪心呢,愿你快乐些.

心中隐痛，不写不舒啊，谢谢三色堇：）

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Posted: 2007-03-04 22:58:13 Post subject:

木容暮又寸 wrote:

六月雪，很冷．
喜欢的诗．问好梅：）

这里也见面，很高兴，问好：）

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Posted: 2007-03-04 22:58:39 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

好象是真事
读了让人难过

是啊，深有同感。

你好朋友，谢来阅读：）

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Posted: 2007-03-04 22:59:05 Post subject:

沙漠 wrote:

观念陈旧，伦理丧失，贫穷疾病，制造了三个悲剧！
问好梅影！

问好沙漠，多谢理解阅评！

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Posted: 2007-03-04 23:36:51 Post subject:

伤心事，伤心字。几首放在一起，形成一个冰冷悲痛的场。问好。 _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1251343504

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Posted: 2007-04-06 22:28:26 Post subject:

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伤心事，伤心字。

几首放在一起，形成一个冰冷悲痛的场。问好。

多谢阅读！

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Posted: 2007-04-06 22:33:13 Post subject:

用这个投三期了。

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Posted: 2007-04-13 05:31:20 Post subject: 问好

好诗太沉重读后令人难以平静 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-04-13 05:32:33 Post subject:

_________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-04-13 19:06:29 Post subject:

情深意切.问好梅子 _________________ 借助诗歌，努力把自己活成一棵树，白天向上，夜里向下．

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Posted: 2007-04-15 21:22:57 Post subject:

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谢谢朋友

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Posted: 2007-04-15 21:23:18 Post subject:

郭全华 wrote:

情深意切.问好梅子

谢谢全华！

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Posted: 2007-04-15 21:24:08 Post subject: Re: 问好

韩少君 wrote:

好诗
太沉重
读后令人难以平静

谢谢朋友理解！握手

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