田建勋 秀才
Joined: 29 Jan 2007 Posts: 109
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Posted: 2007-04-15 15:15:31 Post subject: 七绝*感怀(二首) |
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其一
江湖欲泛驾轻舟,
一路烟波满棹愁。
昔日同为园里客,
而今独老茂陵秋。
其二
芳菲竞艳柳枝新,
几许枯荣又一春。
可惜今宵明月夜,
花香酒满却无人。 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-15 16:27:12 Post subject: |
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| 幽婉孤寂。 |
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梅影三叠 秀才
Joined: 06 Feb 2007 Posts: 203
梅影三叠Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-15 21:16:03 Post subject: |
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| 淡淡忧愁:) |
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
晓松Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-15 21:42:46 Post subject: |
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江湖轻舟,客老茂陵——感慨颇多;
草木枯荣,酒香无人——孤独寂寞。
感怀! |
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田建勋 秀才
Joined: 29 Jan 2007 Posts: 109
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Posted: 2007-04-16 00:27:51 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢三位~问好. |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-16 07:55:33 Post subject: |
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忧伤淡淡。问好!
运笔清新自然。《其一》“驾轻舟”,似可斟酌。 |
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田建勋 秀才
Joined: 29 Jan 2007 Posts: 109
田建勋Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-20 05:24:34 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢您的指点~ |
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