田建勋
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Joined: 29 Jan 2007
Posts: 109
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 Posted: 2007-04-15 15:15:31 Post subject: 七绝*感怀（二首） |
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其一
江湖欲泛驾轻舟，
一路烟波满棹愁。
昔日同为园里客，
而今独老茂陵秋。
其二
芳菲竞艳柳枝新，
几许枯荣又一春。
可惜今宵明月夜，
花香酒满却无人。 |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2007-04-15 16:27:12 Post subject: |
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| 幽婉孤寂。 |
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梅影三叠
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Joined: 06 Feb 2007
Posts: 203
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| Posted: 2007-04-15 21:16:03 Post subject: |
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| 淡淡忧愁：） |
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晓松
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Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
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| Posted: 2007-04-15 21:42:46 Post subject: |
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江湖轻舟，客老茂陵——感慨颇多；
草木枯荣，酒香无人——孤独寂寞。
感怀！ |
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田建勋
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| Posted: 2007-04-16 00:27:51 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢三位~问好. |
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
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| Posted: 2007-04-16 07:55:33 Post subject: |
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忧伤淡淡。问好！
运笔清新自然。《其一》“驾轻舟”，似可斟酌。 |
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田建勋
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Joined: 29 Jan 2007
Posts: 109
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| Posted: 2007-04-20 05:24:34 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢您的指点~ |
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