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PostPosted: 2011-11-20 09:18:26    Post subject: 徵題 Reply with quote

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我在考慮是到店裡去看真實的直立式洗衣機還是在網上看圖片乳果去則可看到實品並與人員卯天各式洗衣的優劣與打折的條件渴能碰到停車場上兜售藏物的青年因為下體拜就是火雞被宰節如果在網上看性能與圖片那點閱之路將蕪限外此刻延毛線球與貓咪象撲而跌落陽台我起身追著滾動的那頭只漸上衣越拉越少不透明逐漸消失......  

蝴蝶忍者與蛹之隱者與露之行者與不悟之仁者曇花夜奔
與遊雲之狂草與懷月之孕橋
一竿釣
與秋蟹之嚼怨
與我問山之姍姍
星之閃閃
而數燈燈闌珊
數羊懶散

丟進去吧攪和
夢是否一台洗衣機
無體
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PostPosted: 2011-11-20 16:05:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏,问好。
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PostPosted: 2011-11-21 21:04:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

晕~~博弈这个甲~~能把我憋死~~~
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PostPosted: 2011-11-22 01:00:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:

我在考慮是到店裡去看真實的直立式洗衣機還是在網上看圖片乳果去則可看到實品並與人員卯天各式洗衣的優劣與打折的條件渴能碰到停車場上兜售藏物的青年因為下體拜就是火雞被宰節如果在網上看性能與圖片那點閱之路將蕪限外此刻毛線球與貓咪象撲而跌落陽台我起身追著滾動的那頭只上衣越拉越少不透明逐漸消失......  


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關於甲的"並夾雜著錯別字"

如耳可示無相見

錯別字在此可以打斷閱讀, 在無標點長句產生思想句讀的功能, 誤讀即使被導回, 誤讀所產生的思想
持續影響/干擾著主線思緒, 這是閱讀留下的影子與主體相互作用. 另
"外此刻延" 外延與此刻在時間上重疊, '沿'未結束, '此刻'已開始.

屬私下構思, 交流.

(緣起, 這兩天在買洗衣機)

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