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团场,火热的秋天(诗歌)
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PostPosted: 2011-10-11 23:32:15    Post subject: 团场,火热的秋天(诗歌) Reply with quote

团场,火热的秋天(诗歌)
许登彦
这是一个多么丰盈的季节
此时 田野里的欢声笑语
在阳光照亮的明眸上
泛起层层涟漪
我的一颗火热的心啊
牵着云朵的纤纤素手
在辽阔的大地上
静静地漂游
朵朵棉花 我的百万姐妹
轻柔的微风掀起
你洁白如雪的裙裾
成为此刻最美的新娘
在那一望无垠的棉海
现代化的大型采棉机游弋其间
宛若飞翔的大鸟
为我们衔来生活的金铜
飞滚的车轮 激情旋转
让丰收的喜悦在原野上
不断地延伸
棉花加工厂 灯火通明
机器的轰鸣声 伴随着
我十万次频率不齐的心跳
走下梳妆台 我的姐妹
轻盈的身骨依然柔柔美美
带着祝福和希翼远嫁他乡
我的心啊 早已随着
故乡上空的那一朵白云
静静地飘向远方

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PostPosted: 2011-10-15 17:45:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

轻盈的身骨依然柔柔美美
带着祝福和希翼远嫁他乡
我的心啊 早已随着
故乡上空的那一朵白云
静静地飘向远方

欣赏,问好,
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PostPosted: 2011-10-15 19:40:09    Post subject: 谢谢chengrunmin老师指点 Reply with quote

谢谢chengrunmin老师指点,问好!
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PostPosted: 2011-10-19 03:45:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

我还没去过棉花加工厂~~
我熟悉棉花~~站在泥土里~
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PostPosted: 2011-10-28 00:57:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢安红红老师的指点,问好!
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PostPosted: 2011-11-04 16:29:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

充盈着美好的生活气息
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PostPosted: 2011-11-08 23:22:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白水大学士的斧正,以诗歌的名义握手!
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