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长江流过湖湘大地(组诗)
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PostPosted: 2011-11-05 03:03:12    Post subject: 长江流过湖湘大地(组诗) Reply with quote

长江流过湖湘大地(组诗)
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◎洞庭湖畔的侧望
长江突然放慢了脚步,一颗碧绿的珍珠
在身边闪耀异样。

那楼台,那刀光剑影,那燃烧的土地,
那封印,那斑竹血泪,那痴情的倚盼,
暮色从苍梧袭来,炎黄在棋盘上笑谈,
那时不分楚河汉界,华夏就是天下!

慢下来,在一个触动心弦的湖畔
小憩片刻,回望一段历史:
一双布鞋转眼就走遍东西南北,
香山在秋天红透,映山红在冬季开放。

万里征途呵,惊涛拍岸卷千堆雪,
这里有三江合流,稻花飘香鱼儿满舱啊,
伊人落下洗漱的脂粉,在这灯光迷离的夜中,
轻舟靠岸,留下忧伤如烟痕的薄!

大风起处,一只麻雀掠过八百里烟波浩淼。


◎湖湘底色
这骨架是三湘大地,湘资源澧筋脉分明,
衡山雄奇,独秀于南国中端,看五千年苍海横流,
多彩的底色呵,是中国红,是洞庭蓝,是南山菊花
绽放的黄,陶渊明笔下的桃源,至今迷乱了世人的眼。

峰断雁回,今天我不拜炎帝的寝陵,只招一招
屈子的游魂,对天长问,离骚重重,
岳麓山下,谁青衣默坐,书声朗朗,
湖湘千年文华的传承,暮鼓晨钟声声沉。

还在留恋小石潭的清澈么?还会爱着莲花的
不蔓不枝么?这底色的厚重,这骨架的坚挺,
关山路遥,范仲淹对着一幅水墨画神思飞远:
洞庭天下水,岳阳天下楼!


◎长江流过一座城
长江停不下自己的脚步,东流复海的向往,
就象一座城,在雨后的春天节节拔高。

这座城,不一定是特指,它可以是巴陵古郡,
也可以是长沙老城,还可以是散落在三湘的任何一粒明珠,
它昨天还穿着灰色的小棉袄怀旧,得意地念着:
于斯为盛,唯楚有才。

不经意,这座城就飞速扩张了,扩张的速度快得
连武广高铁都追不上它的步伐,
不羡慕珠三角,长三角,那些靠海的小宠儿,
长株潭牵手,洞庭桥横,南国造的列车日夜轰隆北上。

长江流过一座城,它带走了快乐的歌声,
带走了传唱千年的底蕴,还有那高昂的号角,
长江停不下自己的脚步,它一再回望,一再回望,
这儿,还有它带不走的梦,日夜斑斓。
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PostPosted: 2011-11-06 05:48:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

大风起处,一只麻雀掠过八百里烟波浩淼。


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PostPosted: 2011-11-07 09:01:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

第一段和第二段写的江山秀丽叠彩峰岭,将相才子相得益彰,景人交融缠绵徘测。词语构建的也舒服。第三节拉近的镜头,也许是现代建设的实描,总觉得有些破坏了整体的美感。这只是我自已的感受。

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