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鹧鸪天定风波贺新郎满庭芳七绝二首沁园春春从天上来五律七绝

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海蛎子
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Posted: 2011-10-01 03:38:09 Post subject: 鹧鸪天定风波贺新郎满庭芳七绝二首沁园春春从天上来五律七绝

宛转云丝搅乱空，修眉无力嫩娇红。翠荷低压蛙埋起，唯感轻蝉两翼风。茶味尽，汗衫松，懒腰抻入水当中。无心检点驴肝肺，博取真凉体内攻。

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Posted: 2011-10-01 03:50:24 Post subject:

成功了

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Posted: 2011-10-01 07:26:29 Post subject:

荷塘清趣，谐趣轻松。欣赏！问好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2011-10-01 08:08:15 Post subject:

哇，海蛎子回来了。

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Posted: 2011-10-06 03:09:35 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

荷塘清趣，谐趣轻松。欣赏！问好！

谢谢黄老师雅评

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Posted: 2011-10-06 03:12:43 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

哇，海蛎子回来了。

谢谢冰清老师

准确地说，我不是回来了，而是第一次来 Laughing

您老上次看到的不是在这里，当时我是没摸到这扇门，才跑到别人家的 Laughing

还有，我会代您向我哥哥姐姐们问好的 Laughing

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Posted: 2011-10-06 03:18:15 Post subject:

雨倚黄昏燕舞空，袅烟犹适养吾慵。野步方知心未稳，须信，待晴还是水淙淙。傍柳追凉风乱搅，难晓，路人相问为何同。只觉眉间凝笑苦，添堵，高游低转复西东。

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Posted: 2011-10-06 06:08:44 Post subject:

海蛎子 wrote:

冰清 wrote:

哇，海蛎子回来了。

谢谢冰清老师

准确地说，我不是回来了，而是第一次来

您老上次看到的不是在这里，当时我是没摸到这扇门，才跑到别人家的

还有，我会代您向我哥哥姐姐们问好的
...

见你就高兴，有你就热闹。
还记得那句：“有我，你不孤寂" Laughing

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Posted: 2011-10-06 12:54:26 Post subject:

喜见开心果。

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Posted: 2011-10-06 14:59:50 Post subject:

读过你的词，方知庆宏兄所说“开心果”的含义。

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Posted: 2011-10-10 06:21:55 Post subject:

有水的地方就有海蛎子 _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

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Posted: 2011-10-11 17:31:39 Post subject:

活泼輕松，读來令人爽神！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2011-11-03 17:10:43 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

见你就高兴，有你就热闹。
...

冰清老师开心就好

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Posted: 2011-11-03 17:11:36 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

喜见开心果。

qinghongh老师吉祥 Laughing

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Posted: 2011-11-03 17:12:26 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

读过你的词，方知庆宏兄所说“开心果”的含义。

笑聊老师吉祥

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Posted: 2011-11-03 17:13:58 Post subject:

连南河 wrote:

有水的地方就有海蛎子

连南河老师吉祥

不清楚淡水里是否有牡蛎，但海里一定是有的 Laughing

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Posted: 2011-11-03 17:14:53 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

活泼輕松，读來令人爽神！

白云闲人老师吉祥

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Posted: 2011-11-03 17:18:55 Post subject:

艺芳 wrote:

呵呵，很熟悉的面孔。旧燕归来否？

“旧燕归来否？”
值罗浮残梦，犹道记时七九。
北国寒封南国雨，只合勾头袖手。
怕又怕、敲窗乱吼。
想想君言真是逗，问天庭、寻个聪明肉。
先动望，再前凑。　

万千欲说难开口。
似烟波约会，茶翁回首。
纠结盈怀齿间透，追往昔、幽香左右。　　
这泪水、无须眉皱。
错认蛮腰为某某，掩羞颜、袅袅随莲走。
拈豆腐，莫嫌臭。 Laughing

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Posted: 2011-11-04 16:17:22 Post subject:

小海蛎子，国内好多朋友都说登不了陆，你是怎么上岸的呢

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Posted: 2011-11-10 02:23:18 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

小海蛎子，国内好多朋友都说登不了陆，你是怎么上岸的呢 Confused

姐姐，我嘛……是潜水俱乐部的 Laughing

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