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《韩氏物语》

韩少君
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Posted: 2011-07-20 17:03:40 Post subject: 《韩氏物语》

《韩氏物语》一、盘的事 1、米四点就醒了七月的四点又湿又凉昨天碗答应邻村的讨了同意把米借给讨 2、从跟村到朵村是一条笔直的路讨偏要拐几个弯讨想在芹的门口站一会儿然后再走 3、两个小时以后芹扶着墙出来了她的腰又细又软肯定是担不动两桶水的 4、米来到讨家天已经黑了米当然看不见黑暗中抱在一起又饥又饿的盘、筷儿和汤勺 5、盘明天要出嫁今晚当然要吃一顿好的这些事米一点也不知道短短的路讨从清晨走到天黑中间有一段空白 6、芹也说不清楚讨在这段时间干嘛去了芹在洗脸她答应给盘做伴娘了二、玫的裙荆骂骂咧咧走下山来昨天它拽了玫的裙子橡很愤怒橡说要给镰介绍玫然后就把这事说了镰要劈荆荆把下山的路走得歪歪斜斜它说，玫的裙子于己无关昨天风大刮的镰起了大早天亮前把事摆平玫看到荆的断肢残臂大喊，没等跑下山去就晕倒了三、鼠媳妇鼠最近很惬意娶了媳妇还新建了窑洞土被挖得伤痕累累很没面子雨说这都不算事后半夜，雨把鼠、鼠媳妇窑洞和土一起冲走埋上了 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

赵福治
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Posted: 2011-07-20 17:55:52 Post subject:

有情节的一首，问好兄。

韩少君
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Posted: 2011-07-28 15:37:50 Post subject:

回谢福治 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

山城子
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Posted: 2011-07-29 00:37:31 Post subject:

生面别开——新颖的叙事诗！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

韩少君
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Posted: 2011-08-03 23:12:20 Post subject:

回谢李老师 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

安红红
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Posted: 2011-10-09 04:32:52 Post subject:

好玩~~把重的玩成轻的~~轻的玩成重的~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

上城
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Posted: 2011-10-21 16:55:34 Post subject:

很有特色。问好少君。 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

韩少君
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Posted: 2011-10-26 05:08:39 Post subject:

谢上城、安红红。问好！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

白水
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Posted: 2011-10-27 18:36:05 Post subject:

贴近生活的诗歌，喜欢看见你们能登陆挺高兴的。

韩少君
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Posted: 2012-03-02 16:55:42 Post subject:

问候白水！久违！最近半年失业有变，流离失所，刚刚稳定！问候北美同仁----- _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

白水
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Posted: 2012-03-02 18:59:29 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

问候白水！久违！最近半年失业有变，流离失所，刚刚稳定！
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愿你一切都好。

博弈
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Posted: 2012-03-02 20:25:44 Post subject:

失業好, 對寫詩好, 會更深入. 失業不好, 會更孤讀. 很多人過不了退休的生活, 因為工作取代了自我. 孔子失業的時間也算很長的. 年輕人(看我老氣橫秋)要多存攢, 方可老來讀易, 寫詩, 考哲, 學農等. _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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