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清静后的海滩

大漠昏鸦
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Joined: 19 Oct 2011
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Posted: 2011-10-26 19:05:16 Post subject: 清静后的海滩

清静后的海滩影子的心，绞痛起来这不是小事脚印就死守着这遍海滩影子窒息着要留最后一口气着急的脚印，找不到可以跺碎的脚板影子扑向奔来的黑夜最后的一口气，吐成了痛的闪电脚印像分娩后，虚脱着飘离海岸海风清扫着清晨的海滩空空的高跟鞋，和放弃了念想的贝壳一起玩弄着美丽、轻闲 _________________ 曾以诗的方式，追求过生活的浪漫。却又想以云的形式，享受生活的涣散。

白水
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Posted: 2011-10-27 18:34:03 Post subject:

文笔娴熟，灵动。欣赏

大漠昏鸦
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Posted: 2011-10-30 03:35:14 Post subject:

谢谢白水。希望能向大家学习，与朋友们交流，提高新诗的欣赏能力。 _________________ 曾以诗的方式，追求过生活的浪漫。却又想以云的形式，享受生活的涣散。

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