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七律 丁亥春思叠前韻六章
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PostPosted: 2007-04-11 05:52:27    Post subject: 七律 丁亥春思叠前韻六章 Reply with quote

七律 丁亥春思叠前韻六章

一、
月滿春城花滿樓,仍然意氣不勝秋。
形隨大冶盈虛化,神逐長江日夜流。
精衛難忘填海石,杜康似可輟心憂。
天涯回首家何在?煙水茫茫渺白鷗。

二、
紫靄橫山夕照遲,人間誰識虎頭癡?
綠楊留別堪題畫,紅豆相思莫賦詩。
飛瀑潺湲流碧髓,空山虛渺展春眉。
曾誇疏鑿丹青手,入夢靈機似舊時。

三、
六塵變幻若飛奔,瀚海無涯日月吞。
呼吸固然惟旦夕,精神終致沛乾坤。
滄桑盡閱知三世,艱苦多經報四恩。
夜半何人吟澤畔,千秋惻愴楚江魂。

四、
古愁莽莽孰能知,對月難勝客子悲。
樓外江聲添寂寞,燈前琴語慰殘衰。
素諳厚福非明慧,誰遣冥頑更絕癡。
萬古窮通難置問,捫心呵壁費追思。

五、
夕陽樓上望天南,無數峰青映水藍。
山閣笛聲悲向秀,城門淚影憶羊曇。
滿園佳色三春盡,一偈禪機畢世參。
最是濛濛時雨至,停雲吟就又何堪?

六、
如鏡波明鳥不驚,庵前野渡短舟橫。
柳叢隱約藏樓閣,沙岸參差列橘橙。
豈有醉人梅子酒,更無閉客雪花羹。
午窗一枕華胥夢,覺望東來紫氣清。
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PostPosted: 2007-04-11 19:51:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

馆主的诗词,用典特多,先收藏,再慢慢欣赏。
有两句:“形隨大冶盈虛化,神逐長江日夜流”,我觉得文如其人。馆主妙笔出神入化,遣词用典,信手拈来,只有读书破万卷,才能厚积而薄发。
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PostPosted: 2007-04-13 06:29:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

性情感慨,儒者風范!

收藏學習!
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PostPosted: 2007-04-15 04:59:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

多謝樓上二位詞長賜評!
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PostPosted: 2007-04-15 05:49:09    Post subject: 拜读馆主大作 Reply with quote

拜读大作,馆主诗思宏阔,收藏学习.
第一章的''缀''字似以''辍''为好,请酌.
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PostPosted: 2007-04-15 18:38:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

忱謝黄洋界詞長指正!末學粗心了,「輟」字乃停止的意思,極是,已改正!
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