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现代* 底片

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Posted: 2011-10-23 04:29:37 Post subject: 现代* 底片

现代* 底片（一）现代衣衫越穿越短文章越写越长（二）蝙蝠惯于穿梭于星空的阳光会刺痛它的双眼（三）小松鼠站在高枝上唱歌的不仅仅只有鸟儿（四）忆鸟儿飞散又复来你却只留下一根羽毛（五）择鹰翔于空，雀鸣于笼你，在哪里？（六）底片他们走了，18条影子走的无声无息孩子死了没有留下一句话妈妈哭了，哭的昏天黑地唯有血写的字是红的

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Posted: 2011-10-23 07:56:52 Post subject:

超短的字 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2011-10-23 14:01:47 Post subject:

是太短，一朵小花太早的凋谢了，，，，，，

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Posted: 2011-10-23 14:08:56 Post subject:

快闪

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Posted: 2011-10-23 14:50:26 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

快
闪

不愧古韵版主，惜字如金
只是精到不知道你要说什么，是逃跑吗？我又不是警察 Laughing

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Posted: 2011-10-23 14:56:43 Post subject:

快闪是国内一种现代年轻人时兴的行为艺术。来的快，时间短，引人注目，印象深刻。短小的诗是否也具有这一特点？故名：快闪我是这么联想的，可别造成误会哟。

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Posted: 2011-10-24 04:45:15 Post subject:

问好庆宏，谢谢分享再来几个：（七）闪电切开天幕，于是有了水的诞生于是有了雷鸣的哭泣（八）生日哭喊着来到人间只因不愿离开天堂？（九）寻找不到神坛的你茫然不知哪里可以安放灵魂

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Posted: 2011-10-24 10:21:46 Post subject:

（六）底片他们走了，18条影子走的无声无息孩子死了没有留下一句话妈妈哭了，哭的昏天黑地唯有血写的字是红的关注小悦悦事件 _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2011-10-24 13:24:33 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

问好庆宏，谢谢分享

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白水兄也成了快闪一族了，这不又闪了三下。 Laughing

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Posted: 2011-10-25 17:21:11 Post subject:

晴宝儿 wrote:

（六）底片
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谢谢宝儿

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Posted: 2011-10-25 17:23:52 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

问好庆宏，谢谢分享

...

白水兄也成了快闪一族了，这不又闪了三下。 Laughing

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