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七绝观三文鱼回游

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-10-13 17:54:00 Post subject: 七绝观三文鱼回游

七绝观三文鱼回流(图片）逆行千里还桑梓苦难艰辛作壮游殒命江河浑不怕 “龙门”一跃见清遒抱歉！现在补发图片 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

冰清
同进士出身

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Posted: 2011-10-13 18:38:00 Post subject:

黄兄好诗。“壮游”--贴切，耐人寻味。几年前我看三文鱼回流，逆水而上，产子而亡，感慨万千。——人畜一般同啊！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-10-14 04:54:50 Post subject:

謝冰清点评。三文鱼的回流，在我看来是悲壮之旅，据说其回流时不吃不喝，有的饥饿而死，其悲烈情状犹在目前。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白云闲人
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Posted: 2011-10-14 06:20:07 Post subject:

龙门一跃見清遒 --- 好句！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

qinghongh
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Joined: 14 Oct 2007
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Posted: 2011-10-14 09:50:25 Post subject:

天下父母，爱子情深。

黄洋界
探花

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Posted: 2011-10-14 16:01:08 Post subject:

謝白云兄点评，謝庆宏评阅。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-10-15 01:53:52 Post subject:

壮哉三文鱼！妙哉黄老师诗！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-10-15 10:28:20 Post subject:

謝笑聊雅评！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-10-17 00:44:23 Post subject:

依韵和黄老师一首：不辞辛苦不辞远，摇尾艰难跋涉游。殒命难为延孕子，可怜人畜一般求。

黄洋界
探花

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Posted: 2011-10-17 12:05:56 Post subject:

谢笑聊兄赐和，三文鱼为了延续后代，勇敢无私地作出了自我牺牲，人与生物界有很多相通之处啊！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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