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【望海潮•重阳感怀】

冰清
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Posted: 2011-10-04 19:04:35 Post subject: 【望海潮•重阳感怀】

【望海潮•重阳感怀】东山风月，清歌南楚，金晖遍洒吟窗。杨柳放依，梧桐共老，祥烟瑞靄扶桑。祝祷也无疆。赤松尚贞立，休叹彷惶。自在英心，五湖偏岸耐凄凉。铿锵。令日重阳。竟新朋故友，漫话衷肠。戏水燕鱼，飞泉瘦石，萸尊坐对平章。杖弃著辉煌。此景何处是？厚土珍黄。恰似一腔器抱，红素映霜塘。（辛卯年重阳节作）

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-10-05 03:26:55 Post subject:

咦，此词豪放，巾帼不让须眉！这同冰清老师胸襟开阔、豪爽有一定关系！欣赏！

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Posted: 2011-10-05 12:14:13 Post subject:

“自在英心，五湖偏岸耐凄凉”，感怀激越，叹赏！问冰清节日好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2011-10-06 03:03:50 Post subject:

佳作不可错过，但有一个字没看明白——“令日重阳”中的“令”

冰清
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Posted: 2011-10-06 06:12:28 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

咦，此词豪放，巾帼不让须眉！这同冰清老师胸襟开阔、豪爽有一定关系！欣赏！

谢笑版！哈，是想快快活活的。

冰清
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Posted: 2011-10-06 06:34:14 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

“自在英心，五湖偏岸耐凄凉”，感怀激越，叹赏！
问冰清节日好！

谢黄兄赏。我也喜欢这句。
感恩节临近，预祝开心快乐！

冰清
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Posted: 2011-10-06 06:43:29 Post subject:

海蛎子 wrote:

佳作不可错过，但有一个字没看明白——“令日重阳”中的“令” Laughing

谢海蛎子。“令日”，吉日。因格律所限，我把原稿“今日”改此，能否通过？你再帮我想想吧!

白云闲人
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Posted: 2011-10-11 17:41:09 Post subject:

诗情豪放，金輝吟窗！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

冰清
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Posted: 2011-10-13 11:23:52 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

诗情豪放，金輝吟窗！

谢白云雅赏。多多保重!

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-10-13 15:08:10 Post subject:

复读冰清老师，望海潮词有种激情冲动，待晚上看看能不能和上一首，抑或写篇赏析。问好老师！

qinghongh
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Posted: 2011-10-13 15:57:12 Post subject:

祝冰清老师，黄老师，白云老师，恢宗老师，听云老师等几位前辈老师重阳节快乐！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-10-13 17:34:01 Post subject:

謝庆宏祝贺节日，预祝你感恩节快乐！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

冰清
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Posted: 2011-10-13 18:26:02 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

复读冰清老师，望海潮词有种激情冲动，待晚上看看能不能和上一首，抑或写篇赏析。问好老师！

谢谢笑聊君，静候大作。但你公务很忙，千万不要弄的过于幸苦 Laughing

冰清
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Posted: 2011-10-13 18:29:53 Post subject:

深謝庆宏君。问好并祝福你！

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-10-14 01:47:07 Post subject:

和一首七律-重阳遐想文/笑聊重阳遐想开怀欣赏大溪川。满目风光收眼前。枫火连天霞色染，菊黄遍地雾颜鲜。深山几只雀莺叫，近海多群水母颠。渐老金秋无限好，白云朵朵又翩翩。

冰清
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Posted: 2011-10-15 17:03:04 Post subject:

谢谢笑聊君和诗！收藏了。

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Posted: 2011-10-17 00:31:57 Post subject:

东山风月、、、杨柳放依，梧桐共老、、、五湖偏岸耐凄凉。、、、把情怀敞开，傲笑山林江湖；任一丝思念，放歌五岳四海。冰清老师力作再来吟赏！

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Posted: 2011-12-28 20:35:46 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

【望海潮•重阳感怀】
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【望海潮•重阳感怀】

冰清老师，大作的确写得豪放典雅，耐读再三，学习了，并祝新年快乐！

冰清
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Posted: 2011-12-30 04:48:45 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

冰清 wrote:

【望海潮•重阳感怀】
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冰清老师，大作的确写得豪放典雅，耐读再三，学习了，并祝新年快乐
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秋版过奖。习作，呵呵！
节日快乐！

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