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五绝—新菊

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-10-05 21:58:33 Post subject: 五绝—新菊

醉慕经霜俏，歌吟自傲身。明知新岁貌，可晓旧时心？

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-10-06 03:48:44 Post subject:

歌吟身自傲，问菊却无声。问莹雪老师好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-10-06 06:03:21 Post subject:

歌吟自傲身神情俱在。问好！

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Posted: 2011-10-06 12:56:38 Post subject:

明知新岁貌，可晓旧时心？好联意深。

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-10-06 15:04:51 Post subject:

歌吟自傲身。可晓旧时心？一吟一问绝妙好诗！

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Posted: 2011-10-06 17:00:11 Post subject:

胡恢宗 wrote:

歌吟身自傲，问菊却无声。
问莹雪老师好。

谢谢您的关注和问候！

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-10-06 17:01:38 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

歌吟自傲身

神情俱在。问好！

谢谢您的点评！问好！

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-10-06 17:03:14 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

明知新岁貌，可晓旧时心？

好联意深。

谢谢qinghongGG点评！问好！

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-10-06 17:04:27 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

歌吟自傲身。
可晓旧时心？

一吟一问绝妙好诗！

谢谢笑卿兄点评！问好。

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Posted: 2011-10-07 04:20:29 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

歌吟自傲身。
可晓旧时心？

一吟一问绝妙好诗！

谢谢笑卿兄点评！问好。

问候莹雪妹！今日晚了，明日和诗奉上，唱和一番。

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-10-07 18:36:27 Post subject:

问好笑卿兄！不必着急，只是看大家和的热闹，一时兴起，就和兄一首。兄知道我很调皮的

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-10-08 00:37:49 Post subject:

咏菊步莹雪妹《新菊》韵并和：花蕊经霜打，矫情曾洁身。有灵观日月，潇洒渡君心。

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-10-08 17:36:04 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

咏菊步莹雪妹《新菊》韵并和：
...

步笑卿兄《咏菊》韵回和：

露润随风影，霜浓伴雪心。
蕊娇舒冷傲，芳淡醉寒身。

连南河
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Posted: 2011-10-10 05:19:10 Post subject:

菊咏兄妹情! _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-10-11 20:56:20 Post subject:

连南河 wrote:

菊咏兄妹情!

问好连兄！唱和结友谊！

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-10-11 21:05:20 Post subject:

露润随风影，霜浓伴雪心。蕊娇舒冷傲，芳淡醉寒身。问候莹雪妹！这几天上不来，今日终于上了网，高兴并步韵和：蛩泣风无影，浅霜护菊心。霜欺姿更傲，但有洁心身。

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