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{投稿第三期}[诗贰首]《黑夜》与《战争》
桑柏
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PostPosted: 2007-04-07 03:09:37    Post subject: {投稿第三期}[诗贰首]《黑夜》与《战争》 Reply with quote

《黑夜》

□桑柏
一只乌鸦在苍茫的夜里
哭泣枯萎的树林
像淋漓的墨意
于是历史蹦了一下
闷响在空寂苦涩的梦境
渐行渐远,渐而无声

黑夜终于与他化为一体
毕竟都是黑的
毕竟都些许阴森
命运便开始剖析他全部的意义
在另一只乌鸦的啼叫中
留下了一地的凄凉
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《战争》
一束生刺的光芒
穿越尘埃
洒下窗台
像一场猝不及防的枪击
一朵花以逃兵的方式盛开
又刹那枯萎
蝴蝶慌了,向黑色迁徙
沧海哭了,往永恒下跪
我触着心灵呼唤
令阴谋无处藏身
一声马蹄
唤醒沉睡的蜜蜂
使春天获得了充血的理由
惹草拈花的混乱画面
深入内心
在一次次的突围、厮杀与情感的世界里
刻下了眼泪的味道

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沙漠
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PostPosted: 2007-04-07 07:37:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

蝴蝶慌了,向黑色迁徙
沧海哭了,往永恒下跪

更喜欢后一首.有叩击心灵的力!
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-04-08 05:18:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

一束生刺的光芒
穿越尘埃
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桑柏
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PostPosted: 2007-04-14 18:54:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢朋友的观赏
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PostPosted: 2007-04-15 03:47:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错的一组!!语言让人心动!提 一下!!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
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桑柏
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PostPosted: 2007-04-20 10:37:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢
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