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七绝和莹雪题春韵图

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-04-10 11:49:57 Post subject: 七绝和莹雪题春韵图

七绝和莹雪题春韵图泽畔伊人灿若花, 微吟瑞草露新芽, 新妆自赏无人见, 一曲请歌荡翠崖.

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-04-10 17:28:56 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

七绝和莹雪题春韵图
泽畔伊人灿若花,
微吟瑞草露新芽,
新妆自赏无人见,
一曲请歌荡翠崖.

七绝回和黄洋界
偶赏丽图句未佳，
轻吟草翠吐新芽。
暖风送曲悠扬至，
谁会心声散远涯？

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-04-11 10:52:02 Post subject: 谢莹雪回和诗

又开新境,欣赏,谢谢莹雪回和诗.

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-04-11 17:26:57 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

又开新境,欣赏,谢谢莹雪回和诗.

呵呵，别客气！

晓松
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Posted: 2007-04-11 19:24:43 Post subject: Re: 谢莹雪回和诗

黄洋界 wrote:

又开新境,欣赏,谢谢莹雪回和诗.

黄兄，再动动脑筋想想，看能不能你再回一首，这样既达到了高兴，又锻炼了手笔。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-04-12 07:20:21 Post subject: 七绝再和莹雪题春韵图

七绝再和莹雪题春韵图遵晓松兄之嘱,再凑一首以和莹雪. 赏画眼高句亦佳, 蒹葭渐长吐新芽, 熏风送暖陶人醉, 再唱新歌绕翠崖.

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-04-12 15:59:53 Post subject:

欣赏。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-04-12 17:34:31 Post subject: Re: 谢莹雪回和诗

晓松 wrote:

黄兄，再动动脑筋想想，看能不能你再回一首，这样既达到了高兴，又锻炼了手笔。

呵呵，还有助战的呀！

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-04-12 18:17:58 Post subject: Re: 七绝再和莹雪题春韵图

黄洋界 wrote:

七绝再和莹雪题春韵图
遵晓松兄之嘱,再凑一首以和莹雪.
赏画眼高句亦佳,
蒹葭渐长吐新芽,
熏风送暖陶人醉,
再唱新歌绕翠崖.

七绝　再回黄洋界题春韵图
妙笔幽图意趣华，
蒹葭知暖吐新芽。
热风弄秀人微醉，
清韵歌诗赋碧涯。

晓松
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Posted: 2007-04-12 19:32:57 Post subject: Re: 七绝再和莹雪题春韵图

黄洋界 wrote:

七绝再和莹雪题春韵图
遵晓松兄之嘱,再凑一首以和莹雪.
赏画眼高句亦佳,
蒹葭渐长吐新芽,
熏风送暖陶人醉,
再唱新歌绕翠崖.

好样的!

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-04-12 22:45:20 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

黄洋界 wrote:

七绝再和莹雪题春韵图
遵晓松兄之嘱,再凑一首以和莹雪.
赏画眼高句亦佳,
蒹葭渐长吐新芽,
熏风送暖陶人醉,
再唱新歌绕翠崖.

好样的!

呵呵！有兴趣你也可以参战哦 do it

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-04-13 05:10:13 Post subject: 致莹雪晓松

莹雪思如泉涌,佩服.赞同莹雪意见,欢迎晓松参战.

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Posted: 2007-04-13 07:46:58 Post subject:

加油

晓松
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Posted: 2007-04-13 19:37:53 Post subject: Re: 致莹雪晓松

黄洋界 wrote:

莹雪思如泉涌,佩服.赞同莹雪意见,欢迎晓松参战.

好嘛，我本来给你们加油助威，现在倒把我给拉进来了，不公啊不公！好吧，为了大家一起开心，我也不怕献丑，编两句：

才过清明景色佳，
复苏万物露萌芽。
枫坛春意尤其旺，
佳句连连无尽涯。

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-04-14 15:32:44 Post subject: Re: 致莹雪晓松

黄洋界 wrote:

莹雪思如泉涌,佩服.赞同莹雪意见,欢迎晓松参战.

呵呵，昨天停了一天电，今天才上来。

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-04-14 15:36:12 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

加油

嘻嘻，GG你是哪伙拉拉队呀？ sticking tongue

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-04-14 15:51:34 Post subject: Re: 致莹雪晓松

晓松 wrote:

[
好嘛，我本来给你们加油助威，现在倒把我给拉进来了，不公啊不公！好吧，为了大家一起开心，我也不怕献丑，编两句：

才过清明景色佳，
复苏万物露萌芽。
枫坛春意尤其旺，
佳句连连无尽涯。

呵呵，回和晓松
将半春分柳吐芽，
清新万物展韶华。
赋诗酣战人兴旺，
绝句连篇未尽崖。

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