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莺啼序--步吴文英《春晚感怀》韵(兼步白脚)缅怀彭德怀元帅
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PostPosted: 2011-10-04 02:23:43    Post subject: 莺啼序--步吴文英《春晚感怀》韵(兼步白脚)缅怀彭德怀元帅 Reply with quote

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金风乍欺病酒,正银光透户。轻吟促、蛩泣郊城,似言秋事临暮。柳舟晃、思怀不却,重阳祭首疆场树。

烈士情魂荡,西风手招如絮。



数载南湖,转战唯马,是横刀趁露。脱围困、鲜血成溪,巧谋夺胜奇素。任残阳、斜晖影窄,恁军号、吹如金缕。

转念空,奔走朝阳,望天鸥鹭。




草原慢老,壮士求生,路遥漫寄旅。食野草、雪寒天信,一路兵萎,偶透炊香,几番风雨?民族渴盼,江山羞黛,

频欺中国如何宿?记当时、日寇侵华渡。将军仿佛,八年抗战堪诗,血流脚下尘土。




闲幽盼极,望断天涯,痛内烟又苎。有领袖、撰文遗唾,泪湿鲛绡,统一民归,中华新舞。直言纸写,庐山长恨,

英雄从此南归雁,黑沉沉、陨落擎天柱。伤心不过江南,一酹重招,战魂在否?



可平可仄者,见《钦定词谱》。
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PostPosted: 2011-10-04 07:19:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

一代元戎,庐山长恨。与兄同缅,“战魂在否”?
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PostPosted: 2011-10-04 12:53:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

忠直元帅多磨难。
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PostPosted: 2011-10-05 03:13:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="黄洋界"]一代元戎,庐山长恨。与兄同缅,“战魂在否”?[/quot

问候黄老师!谢谢赏评同缅! 战魂在否?
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PostPosted: 2011-10-05 03:16:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
忠直元帅多磨难。


问候庆宏兄!谢谢点评:忠直元帅多磨难。一酹重招,战魂在否?
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PostPosted: 2011-10-06 07:37:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

缅慕德义,缅怀功绩;重招战魂,心泪如雨。

拜读笑版好诗思,好长调。
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PostPosted: 2011-10-06 15:10:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
缅慕德义,缅怀功绩;重招战魂,心泪如雨。

拜读笑版好诗思,好长调。


深谢冰清老师雅赏鼓励!问好!
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