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笑聊
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Posted: 2011-09-29 02:06:25 Post subject: 绝句---重阳临近有感

文/笑聊未逢落葉已知秋，蛩泣枫红谁晓愁？霜染黄花异梦少，登高又赋满怀柔。

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Posted: 2011-09-29 06:59:19 Post subject:

草和一首，请笑聊兄指正。登高又赋满怀柔不负人生又一秋美酒盈樽须畅饮披襟一醉解千愁 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2011-09-29 12:59:25 Post subject:

好诗好和。

SLIU
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Posted: 2011-09-29 17:52:49 Post subject:

欣赏好诗，顺口溜一个。。。披襟一醉解千愁横卧云水荡扁舟鳞波漾去尘世远霜打枫红好个秋

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Posted: 2011-09-29 18:36:36 Post subject:

劲赏佳作。问好笑聊版！

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Posted: 2011-09-30 03:11:56 Post subject:

谢谢黄老师和诗！接的自然流畅，意境更上一层！问好黄老师！接黄老师一首：披襟一醉解千愁，梦醒原来早已秋。霜鬓镜中观自在，情怀满透却温柔。

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Posted: 2011-09-30 03:14:53 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

好诗好和。

问好庆宏兄！谢谢！和不也凑一首助兴？以增节日气氛！

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Posted: 2011-09-30 03:31:41 Post subject:

sliu6 wrote:

欣赏好诗，顺口溜一个。。。
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好久不见，问好！你接的黄老师的诗韵味十足，堪称佳作！
也接一首献丑，增加节日氛围：

霜打枫红好个秋，黄花渐渐入双眸。
登高不问前朝事，一酹英魂祭水流。

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Posted: 2011-09-30 03:33:12 Post subject:

昕阳一片 wrote:

劲赏佳作。问好笑聊版！

昕版不用客气，问好！何不也凑一首？增加节日氛围！

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Posted: 2011-09-30 10:25:18 Post subject:

sliu6 wrote:

欣赏好诗，顺口溜一个。。。
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霜打枫红好个秋，一江碧水向东流。
人间多少缤纷叶，写满悲欢离别愁。

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Posted: 2011-10-01 03:41:36 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

sliu6 wrote:

欣赏好诗，顺口溜一个。。。
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霜打枫红好个秋，一江碧水向东流。
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庆宏兄好诗！转结句寓意深刻，余音不绝！学习欣赏并致秋祺！

写满悲欢离别愁，小楼观月泪直流。
情怀一掬君知晓，枫染青山又是秋。

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Posted: 2011-10-01 08:17:38 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

sliu6 wrote:

欣赏好诗，顺口溜一个。。。
...

好久不见，问好！你接的黄老师的诗韵味十足，堪称佳作！
也接一首献丑，增加节日氛围：

霜打枫红好个秋，黄花渐渐入双眸。
登高不问前朝事，一酹英魂祭水流。
...

欣赏好诗，也溜个，见笑！

一酹英魂祭水流，石帆莹澈映清眸。
登山再把真庭看，云尽长天万里秋。

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Posted: 2011-10-01 08:48:27 Post subject:

云尽长天万里秋。好意境！

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Posted: 2011-10-02 02:01:48 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

sliu6 wrote:

欣赏好诗，顺口溜一个。。。
...

欣赏好诗，也溜个，见笑！
...

问候冰清老师！拜读佳作，结句犹赏！

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Posted: 2011-10-02 20:49:38 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

sliu6 wrote:

欣赏好诗，顺口溜一个。。。
...

好久不见，问好！你接的黄老师的诗韵味十足，堪称佳作！
...

是啊，好久不见了，祝福节日愉快！多谢鼓励！ Very Happy

你的诗有人接了，我就接后面一个。。

云尽长天万里秋
排雁掠空欢语留
十里黄花香溢远
牧童横笛小村头

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-10-03 03:40:46 Post subject:

sliu6 wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

sliu6 wrote:

欣赏好诗，顺口溜一个。。。
...

好久不见，问好！你接的黄老师的诗韵味十足，堪称佳作！
...

是啊，好久不见了，祝福节日愉快！多谢鼓励！ Very Happy

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嗨，节日愉快！一来就是一首佳作，我接上：

牧童横笛小村头，落日红霞天际留。
笛曲悠扬传四海，侬歌侬舞喜丰收。

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Posted: 2011-10-06 17:28:29 Post subject:

欣赏唱和佳句。和一首《秋趣》悠然叶舞醉金秋，独有蛩鸣谱曲柔。泼墨重阳诗意妙，挥毫雅韵诉清幽。

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Posted: 2011-10-07 04:21:28 Post subject:

明日一并奉上。

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Posted: 2011-10-08 02:01:18 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

sliu6 wrote:

欣赏好诗，顺口溜一个。。。
...

欣赏好诗，也溜个，见笑！
...

欣赏佳作，也溜一个：
云尽长天万里秋，秋高气爽自风流。
流出菊韵新霜色，色美才能注我眸。

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Posted: 2011-10-08 02:20:37 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

欣赏唱和佳句。
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悠然叶舞醉金秋，独有蛩鸣谱曲柔。
泼墨重阳诗意妙，挥毫雅韵诉清幽。

秋趣步莹雪韵：

幽深曲径伴金秋，秋意怜怀似水柔。
柔弱新花传菊韵，韵音儒雅寄思幽。

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