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七律 山亭遇雨
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PostPosted: 2011-09-28 00:09:11    Post subject: 七律 山亭遇雨 Reply with quote
小坐孤亭燕過肩
蜻蜓自顧急周旋
瑤池洗墨傾盆注
玉女投壺萬箭穿
雲去方知山在水
虹垂又見路通天
陰晴瞬變從容對
無限風光正眼前
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云入虚怀无上下 水逢雅境自方圆
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PostPosted: 2011-09-28 12:25:40    Post subject: Reply with quote
云去方知山在水，虹垂又见路通天。
此联生动形象，欣赏！
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PostPosted: 2011-09-28 12:55:33    Post subject: Reply with quote
黄洋界 wrote:
云去方知山在水，虹垂又见路通天。
此联生动形象，欣赏！


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PostPosted: 2011-09-29 01:50:13    Post subject: Reply with quote
形象贴切，和师友们同感！
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PostPosted: 2011-10-03 05:53:06    Post subject: Reply with quote
弄斧之作，見笑！
祝朋友們假期快樂！
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